27-03-2020, 12:49 PM
bahut sohne......nahi reesa tuhadi bai ji.....
bahut wadiya create karde ho scene nu......conversation ta mainu sab toh jyada pasand aayi ......kalla kalla jo dialogue likhde hai ....puri realistic vibe aaundi hai.....sira bai
u r just amazing writer....
jyoti te nuri di jugalbandi ne taa puri aag la ditti.....bahut swaad aaya pad ke....
keep going bai
keep writing
bahut wadiya create karde ho scene nu......conversation ta mainu sab toh jyada pasand aayi ......kalla kalla jo dialogue likhde hai ....puri realistic vibe aaundi hai.....sira bai
u r just amazing writer....
jyoti te nuri di jugalbandi ne taa puri aag la ditti.....bahut swaad aaya pad ke....
keep going bai
keep writing