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Incest ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2
(24-03-2020, 03:06 PM)Zaspreet Wrote: Veer bina proof to iljam nhi layide. Ajkal koi itna vehla nhi ki fake accounts bna ke dinbhr comment kri chle. Nale story likhna koi khel nhi h. Gante lg jnde ik chota update likh nu. Khud likh ke dekhi 22 , smj aa jau meri gall.

Healthy criticism te sirf criticism ch fark hunda. Writer sa hosla wadao, na ki nuktacheeni kro. Aini investigation krn di bajaye story likh lo veer. Ithe readers nu v fayda ho jvega. 

Punjabi section haje pair pasaar reha holi holi ithe. So motivate kro. Bhani maarni chadd do veer.

Yaar eh Kon a faltoo jeha Banda dragon wolf. Jooth jahi
Oo pa g ehnu koi dassey 22 ik story nu le k proper update karna , ehda Matlab inj aa k jidan ik part time job manage karna. Paa g 8 ghantey lagdey menu ik update den lai. Bai Sanu kehra xossipy payment kardi jehra koi inni mehnat Karey. 
Aithey bus assi entertainment lai likhi da. Writer nu bus mujh labhda te oh wa readers de comments. Dragon wolf di gall to me bohat demotivate Hoya bai.
Sb tu dukh wali eh gall hai keh k sb achey writers nu hitt kita gya. J koi ik adha Banda himmat comments Kar reha te ohnu vi maaf nahi keeta. Dragon bhai justify te Karo keh kyon koi Inna sayyapa Paley ga fake te multiple i.ds banawn da?
Bohat dukh Hoya bai. 
By the way me Pakistan tu likh reha. Iss forum te pehli story likh reha par eh attitude vekh k Dil nai Kar reha hor likhan nu
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RE: ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2 - by Harmanjeet723 - 20-01-2020, 01:15 PM
RE: ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2 - by Harmanjeet723 - 20-01-2020, 01:33 PM
RE: ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2 - by Harmanjeet723 - 22-01-2020, 11:13 PM
RE: ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2 - by Harmanjeet723 - 27-01-2020, 05:20 PM
RE: ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2 - by Harmanjeet723 - 07-02-2020, 09:00 AM
RE: ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2 - by Harmanjeet723 - 15-02-2020, 11:00 PM
RE: ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2 - by Harmanjeet723 - 16-02-2020, 11:56 AM
RE: ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2 - by Horsepower - 24-03-2020, 09:38 PM



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