20-03-2020, 12:54 AM
(19-03-2020, 10:29 PM)Rebel.Jatt Wrote: Do tinn din kamm jeyada hon karke sir chakra reha si. Is lai jo vi, jis tarah da vi oot patang dimagh vich aaya likh ditta hai. Kall vaste do update hor tyar hann. Bass edit karna hai. Ho sakeya tan kall nu do update hor post kar devenga. please read the story and rate it accordingly. Also post your views. Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Main kai dina ton vaapas hindi section vich jaan vare soch riha haan. Kai stories likhan da socheya si par punjabi section vich readers bahut ghatt ne. Maza nahi ayunda yaar likhan da. Koshish tan he kujh stories likh deva punjabi section vich. Par pata nahi man badal jave tan fir main hindi section vich active ho javanga. Thanks for all viewers.
Nhi bai yr ida na kri ki hoeya j readers ghat ah ta bai asi kidr jama ge yr bs ek tere story padan ayi es te punjabi yr bai tere likhni kyaa batta.. conversation, like gallan batta karn da treeka wakhra hiaa. Bhut psand ayundiaa bai tereiaa storiaa bai bnke besak update ek week to de deya kri pr likhi jai bai bnke continew rakhi story please it’s my humble request..... please bai reply kri koi