19-03-2020, 09:33 AM
(02-12-2019, 12:46 PM)Logan555 Wrote: Maine bhi shabana ke is update ka kaafi wait kara ise likhne ko lekar kaafi excited bhi tha but recently jo hua uske baad meri is update ko likhne ki ichha nahi ho rahi. Kyuki update likhte waqt hume waisa hi sochna padta hai update ko jada se jada realistic banane ke liye. Aur philhaal mere dimaag me kuchh thoughts nahi aa rahe kyuki us incident aur shabana ke update me kaafi similarity hai waha bhi wo 4 log the yaha bhi 4 hai, waha bhi use dhoke se trap kara gaya and same with shabana. To shabana ke bare me sochte sochte dimaag wahi chala jata hai aur mood kharab ho jata hai. Isliye is update ko mai skip nahi karunga par philhaal ke liye postpone karta hu aur shobha neha ka update pehle bana raha hu. Uske baad is update ke bare me sochunga. Shobha Neha ka combo update bhi bahut badiya aur kaafi twist se bhara hai to tab uska maza uthaiyega. Now i am working on it.
Bhai mein apki story bahut time se pad raha hu par kabhi koi comment nahi kiya uske liye sorry but shabana ka ye update padte hui bahut ajeeb sa lag raha tha is liye comment karna pada...aap isko skip mat Karo bus aisa kux twist kar do jisse shabana inki changul se bach jaye or sahi salamat haweli pahuch jaye...jaise yahan bhi koi saaya aa jaye or Charon ka bura haal karke shabana ko bhagne ka mauka de de or wo Charon ko aisa sabak sikhaye ki wo phir kabhi shabana to kya kisi ke saath bhi kux bhi karne se darr jaye....bhai hum sab yahan enjoyment karne aate hai par Logan bhai aisa sab pad kar vikrit mansikta wale is sab ko excitement samjh kar Hyderabad jaise ganda kaam bhi kar sakte hai is liye aap is story ko dubara aisa mod de do ki agar koi aisa soche bhi to story ke end ko pad kar uski rooh kaamp jaye....baaki aap bahut ache writter Ho khud hi samjahdar Ho or Ho sakta hai apne iska update likh bhi diya ho to usko change karke ek humanity ka example do
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