03-03-2020, 12:52 AM
Bhai Pehli bar xossipy pe comment kar raha hu, apki story kafi acchi hai and i appreciate that but yar wo gupta wala part Pehle pura karo uske bina ek incompleteness si lag rahi hai wo ek behad romanchkari mod tha jab neha do paraye mardo ke samne squirt kar rahi thi really wanted to know what happens after that fir uske bad ap apne hisab se story age badhao ap kafi Accha likh rahe ho