24-02-2020, 08:07 PM
(This post was last modified: 24-02-2020, 08:13 PM by nishantsagar60. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Great update bhai , i have been a silent reader since beginning.
Some suggestions. Agar pasand aaye to consider karna
kyonki Itna mujhe pata hai aapka imagination hamlogo se achha hai
Neha ko javed ke control me hi rakhna kisi aur ka control neha pe nhi ho, javed neha ko laxmi se blackmail hone se bachaye. Laxmi neha ko sab ke samne jaleel to kar de( nangi waigerah etc) but koi aur neha ko chod na paye laxmi ke kahne pe. Neha ko is situation se javed nikalega to uska bharosa aur bad jayega . Aur agar javed neha ko kisi se chudwana chahe to chudwaye.means full control javed ka hona chahiye.
Aur bhai ye story jaldbazi me khatam mat karna. Abhi karan ko puri tarah se jaleel karwana fir dheere dheete neha ki bhabhi aur maa scene me aaye.
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. THANKS For a great story
Some suggestions. Agar pasand aaye to consider karna
kyonki Itna mujhe pata hai aapka imagination hamlogo se achha hai
Neha ko javed ke control me hi rakhna kisi aur ka control neha pe nhi ho, javed neha ko laxmi se blackmail hone se bachaye. Laxmi neha ko sab ke samne jaleel to kar de( nangi waigerah etc) but koi aur neha ko chod na paye laxmi ke kahne pe. Neha ko is situation se javed nikalega to uska bharosa aur bad jayega . Aur agar javed neha ko kisi se chudwana chahe to chudwaye.means full control javed ka hona chahiye.
Aur bhai ye story jaldbazi me khatam mat karna. Abhi karan ko puri tarah se jaleel karwana fir dheere dheete neha ki bhabhi aur maa scene me aaye.
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. THANKS For a great story