24-02-2020, 02:27 PM
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(23-02-2020, 08:33 PM)Kiran45 Wrote: I loved the last 2 updatesI was holding onto the 'BACKSTORY' for quite a while. I was not sure when I was going to reveal the twist. I noticed a lack of sympathy for Shilpa among readers so I thought let's reveal the backstory.
The way shilpa took revenge against harsh is fantastic,I didn't expected that shilpa will torture him to that level
I loved the affection between Asish and shilpa
"She thought he is a monster cause her husband told her so, and he thought she is just a whore who would let anybody ravage her the way her husband produced her to him" this lines are excellent man
I don't know how you come up with this great ideas and games ,the like setup of each scenes in this story
The flashback is good it is very smooth and I expected the much more complex flashback but this flashback is simple and answer many questions
Waiting for next update man
I am glad that you enjoyed the 'games' and 'ideas' the characters play or come up with.