23-02-2020, 08:33 PM
(This post was last modified: 23-02-2020, 08:33 PM by Kiran45. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
I loved the last 2 updates
The way shilpa took revenge against harsh is fantastic,I didn't expected that shilpa will torture him to that level
I loved the affection between Asish and shilpa
"She thought he is a monster cause her husband told her so, and he thought she is just a whore who would let anybody ravage her the way her husband produced her to him" this lines are excellent man
I don't know how you come up with this great ideas and games ,the like setup of each scenes in this story
The flashback is good it is very smooth and I expected the much more complex flashback but this flashback is simple and answer many questions
Waiting for next update man
The way shilpa took revenge against harsh is fantastic,I didn't expected that shilpa will torture him to that level
I loved the affection between Asish and shilpa
"She thought he is a monster cause her husband told her so, and he thought she is just a whore who would let anybody ravage her the way her husband produced her to him" this lines are excellent man
I don't know how you come up with this great ideas and games ,the like setup of each scenes in this story
The flashback is good it is very smooth and I expected the much more complex flashback but this flashback is simple and answer many questions
Waiting for next update man
--Kiran45
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