23-02-2020, 03:37 PM
(22-02-2020, 02:48 PM)Yampag Wrote: Ohhoo.. good one.. narration keeping reality intect..i.e. old man unable to sustain more though taken her as far as possible.. very good erotic narration..
It seems more characters are igoing to involve..MORE THE MARRIERS..
Write as per your thought but expecting the male characters remain unknown form others who fuck Jaya or her freind-teacher.. as she some how save the secrets from other...
(22-02-2020, 02:19 PM)krishkj Wrote:Excellent way of going and explain about shekar capacity in small fun with jaya let see how jaya starts fun with mani and Rahim for whether hardcore or softcore fun
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Ashima new face nice I hope you can go much long with her too anyway boss keep update weekly once otherwise I feel readers miss tempo and feels sad so try to update weekly once or monthly twice in long updates
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Keep rocking...pics r nice
Thanks.... 1st part of Jaya's sex with Shekhar, most of the readers were disappointed. But Jaya must need an opening sex. If I use Mani or Rahim - then there is no difference from other stories. Now she is little flexible, she can control them. Otherwise they will control her and make beg her for fuck and make her as slut of them. I don't want to show Jaya teacher as a slut. Here Shekhar uncle is a reputed person. He can't be down as Rahim and Mani. Also he can't share the secret to anybody. So I choose him first.
Here I am introduce Ashima teacher as a second heroine of this story. May be Ashima's friendship give more adventures situation in Jaya's life. Not sure May be.... Around next 10 updates are in my mind to develop and present here. But need much time. Wait for that.
Anyway thanks for the support.