15-02-2020, 05:28 PM
What an outclass writer you are!! I have been reading stories for years and have read many outstanding stories but yours is one of the best.
When I started reading your story I felt transported to the moments you described, I was living the moment as if it was happening in front of my eyes. Truly awesome writing skills you have mate.
The scene description, the language and the way story flows, the way it stirs up reader's imagination and senses is not only incredible but unbelievably stunning. You certainly have a class of your own and I could clearly describe you as one amongst the best writer on all erotic forums out there.
This story was very very capturing in the first part and I really could not blink my eyes while reading it. However, I would say that the standard went down a bit when you shifted from Gupta's part to the second part of story. But now it is going up again and maintaining the level of your outstanding and mind blowing writing skills.
Keep going mate you definitely have a gift.
When I started reading your story I felt transported to the moments you described, I was living the moment as if it was happening in front of my eyes. Truly awesome writing skills you have mate.
The scene description, the language and the way story flows, the way it stirs up reader's imagination and senses is not only incredible but unbelievably stunning. You certainly have a class of your own and I could clearly describe you as one amongst the best writer on all erotic forums out there.
This story was very very capturing in the first part and I really could not blink my eyes while reading it. However, I would say that the standard went down a bit when you shifted from Gupta's part to the second part of story. But now it is going up again and maintaining the level of your outstanding and mind blowing writing skills.
Keep going mate you definitely have a gift.