14-02-2020, 08:51 AM
nice update. I would suggest to keep the story how you have envisioned it. if you take too many suggestions from everyone which is not part of the main plot idea of yours then you will be lost to figure out what to write next. dont take suggestions unless you are stuck. you cant keep everyone happy a good erotic story is a good erotic story irrespective of its storyline. good luck for the next update