Adultery No One Dies a Saint (Completed)

[andhratochennai]

Hi guys, 

A few facts about the story.

1. I started working on this story on 07th April 2018. The story thread was created in Xossip 7 months after that, and by then I had worked out almost 35 chapters. After posting 10 chapters, the Xossip site was discontinued. Then came Xossipy and I restarted posting it from the beginning, since 29 Nov 18.
Now it has ended on 05 Aug 19.
So, how long it took me? Almost 16 months.

2. Initially, the story was developed in the first person, telling the whole story in Atul's point of view. But then I thought it would look exactly like 'Knowing...' series and so I changed it.

3.  The story's working title was 'My wife's friends.' The other considerations were 'The Chase Begins', 'The Chase: the curious case of a husband and wife', and 'the forbidden fruit'. The story's premise was a husband whose wife is being chased/pursued by their friends - whom he cannot restrict. Atul knows that they have dirty dreams about Anvita and he hates that. Then I discarded these titles for I thought they were too cliched in forums like Xossipy.

4. While working on it under the title of 'forbidden fruit', the story had more cuckold theme attached to it. The story had two phases. The first phase was to end after the rooftop night when Varun got intimate with a drunk Anvita. That night Varun would go on to have sex with her, making her cum(for the first time after her marriage, obviously) while Atul was forced to watch it silently because of the presence of his loudmouth colleagues on the same rooftop. The ending of phase 1 was explained like this:-
Atul and Anvita talk more about it (the sex with Varun) and with it, their own sexual experience with each other improves drastically. When he enquires about Varun’s size, she says he was just like Atul. More than the size, it was the ‘forbidden fruit’ factor that turned her on so much. Varun later meets Atul and apologises for his mistake. He claims he had read her signals wrong and he couldn’t control himself as he was under the influence of alcohol as well.
A few more nights later, Anvita mentions to Atul about Varun asking her out for a dinner. She said ‘if you are okay, may I tell yes to him?’ And Atul replied ‘yes.'
After this, in phase 2, the story sticks to the cuckold theme where Anvita would go on with others too. In this phase, everyone gets to fuck her. But there was no thrill once the woman becomes a slut. It would have been a run-of-the-mill story with no scope for a nice ending.

5. During the initial story building, there were many sexual encounters. Varun had sex with Anvita in the rooftop. Shreyas had sex with her in the car which Atul had to witness while hiding in the dicky. Prithvi had sex with her in his dad's room - in a standing position - during the wedding reception. Maniesh had sex with Ridhima twice -the second time being in Atul's presence, him watching and masturbating. Nikunj Sahni had sex with Radhika first and later Atul joining them for a threesome. Manjot would bang Ridhima. And Atul had sex with Ankita not once but twice. However, Rajat doesn't get it even in this version!
I know a lot of readers here might be disappointed that I discarded all of these.

6. Initially, Ridhima's name was Nalini Shrivastav. She was forty-five years old.

7. I was not so sure about including Ridhima's pregnancy theme because in the 'Knowing part-II' I already had one such element - the protagonist leaving one character impregnated in the end.

Looking back, all these things make me realise how long this journey has been. What made it wonderful is, of course, your neverending support and encouragement. There had been times when I struggled to get going, but your support led me through. I know I might have disappointed a few of you with the pace and lack of erotic content towards the end, but we have talked much about it already. About the tone of comments, as I have always maintained, I welcome both positive and negative comments alike, because they inspire me to write more and better.

Now I will take some rest. I'm not thinking about writing anything for a few days (or weeks). I need to shake Atul and Anvita off my mind first. I'll be around, as a reader here, sharing my thoughts about your views and other stories. I also plan to read my own story from the beginning to the end. I need to read to once as a reader. 

Please feel free to write more comments and reviews. Now the story has finished and I expect some reviews on the story as a whole, complete work.

A small request: please do not copy-paste this story anywhere. I don't like it.

Keep reading and keep posting.
With love.
Krish.

Ah great story man..
i am so sad to see the story ending...
i thought anvithas encounters will continue after that...
i always end my day reading your story.. i cant leak my load without reading your story... and this story gave me great imaginations and immense pleasure.. 
thank you so much..
you helped me leak for many months... 
do yu have other stories written.. if so please share the link..


i want to know one thing... i wonder why people write stories spending this much time... do you people get something to write with that much dedication and perfection...

thanks..