Adultery Dreamer's Scribblings ...by dreamer59 (Completed)
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"Journey of a cuckold husband"(Original Theme)
Writer’s Note
vyasya
Author of the original story


Dreamer

This is the author of the original story "Journey Of A Cuckold." It is a very good feeling when someone picks key elements, characters of a plot to spin out their own story. I have liked your story. Although, you have picked a lot of the main content as it is you altered some of the situations around to make it sound the way you would have liked it.

A lot of the story was actually quite good and I really liked it. However, it was the last chapter that made it far too realistic for me to even accept it as a good ending.This may actually be perfectly acceptable to quite some folks and there is nothing wrong with it.

As they say you can't please everyone. Anyway's I really wanted to share why I named the story "Journey Of A Cuckold." It was because I believe most cuckolds are born and not made. They have an innate desire to see their mates screwed by someone much better endowed. However, in a conventional society such as ours it is quite difficult to lead such a lifestyle and hence they would more likely need a lot of assistance from the environment in realizing their fantasies. Rohini was introduced only for this very purpose. Similarly, the other characters around him make it possible for him to realize his dreams. And then again I really wanted to touch upon all degrees of cuckoldry culminating into the ultimate one (as per me) - conceiving from the lover.

I routinely receive hate mail from folks who don't enjoy some of these aspects. What I like about you was that instead of complaining you chose the key elements and wove your own story around it. 

I don't intend to debate and neither do I intend to preach anyone here. These stories are my favorite pastime. It is ironic but I started penning these stories when I realized that I needed to improve my writing skills. One of the reasons Journey Of A cuckold has so many characters is because I wanted to experiment with them and see if I could weave a meaningful story with that many characters. Earlier stories were written in the first person and then I switched to third person in the "Seven Days" series.

As long as I have interesting ideas, I would continue to develop such stories. Although, it takes me an awfully long time to churn out these stories due the hectic work schedule I have.

You can talk to me vyasya on gmail if you feel like.

Vyasya
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RE: Dreamer's Scribblings ...by dreamer59 (Completed on Xossip) - by kamdev99008 - 07-02-2020, 12:03 AM



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