Misc. Erotica The Hunt - (A Wife's Adultery Love Story)

[Devilmaycry]

your story ....more than the story your narration and portraying of characters is ultimate.............

i'm very impressed with your story

in my opinion your story is far greater epic........... than the so called epic...unwanted houseguest..... left in middle by original author

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now on present scenerio
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the weakest portrayed character of the story has the sharpest mind.......... even more sharper than ashish
because ashish is using his power and position too beside his intelligence

but rahul............ he has no power, no position, no dominating status..... instead he is one dominated by everyone....
be it mahesh, shilpa, ashish or even their subordinates

but he has learnt his techniques from his mistress (feminine master  ) dr praveen ....... a psychiatrist .... manipulator of minds
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his first target shilpa is trapped in a web tightning day by day....... worsen to it .....her sex episode with rahul....... make her feel guilt, degrade and fearful...... in her innerself

on the other hand .... his second target.......... mahesh is also not in much better condition........... humiliation by ashish making him aggressive and short tempered...... leading to distractionfrom shilpa........... her partner in crime(s)

waiting for next update eagerly................... what is waiting for shilpa inside ashish's flat

That's high praise . Enjoyed reading your analysis. Thank you very much. I am abstaining myself from talking about the characters cause I might spoil the story. It's good to read about the characters from other's viewpoint.