Adultery My wife, why did she betray me (completed)

[Johnnythedevil]

It is not the intention of the readers to find faults with the story. As they get involved in the story, they just cannot avoid pointing out the missing things or their observations that author might have failed to notice or forgot to mention. Unlike other normal sex stories, this story is different. It has more things to take on the psychology of the pratagonists. Every single action of them make some difference in their behavior. It was very well handled in the original story, the readers do expect the same in the sequel too. For example, when meera lied to saravanan on the pink jasmine for the first time, how he felt bad and cried within and when he saw meera and prabu together in the old house. The emotions are somehow went missing in the sequel for saravanan.

The intimacy of saravanan and meera was also good in the original when saravanan hugged to console her after she feared about her husband when he saw them together with prabu near school ground. Secondly, he had sex with her during the day when prabu was in chennai. It should have continued in the sequel too. Meera/saravanan, should have done some changes to their house to remove the memories of prabu meera unison.

Please do not take the comments in the wrong sense. Request you to continue the story. There is no hurry to finish the story, try to stick to the original and have more emotions, love etc. This is a wonderful story. Kudos for writing the sequel. Everyone reading this is waiting to know how meera is going to react on the truth. Please post the next update soon.