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Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER)
#12
Update 5


Guru y - Beta iss portal ke us par wo jungle hea..

Yaha se aage tumhe akele he jana hoga. 


Meri baat yaad rakhna shant dimag se socho ge toa har muskil ka jawab tumhare he pass milega..

Apna dyan rakhna...

Mene dono ka ek bar fir aashirwad liya or uss portal mea chalagaya..

Portal mea guste he muje ajib se tarange mehsoos hone lagi..


Aisa lag raha tha ki mea bijli ke darwaje se gujar raha hu...

Mea jese he portal ke uss par gaya toa mea chaunk gaya tha qki...

Ab aage...

Portal ke ispar ka najar bohot he ajib tha..

Mea is waqt jungle ke sima par khara tha jaha se wo jungle start hotay..

Par chukane wali baat ye thi ki jungle ke sima jaha se start hoti hea waha raat thi or uske is taraf din tha..

Mea yea dekhkar chaunk gaya tha..

Mene insab bato ko najar andaj karke apni nilli ankho se jungle ke taraf dekhne lagga muje jungle bohot se ajib chije dikhi..

Fir mene dire dire aage badna suru kiya..

Is waqt jungle mea andheratha par a raghav ke di huyi sakti ke karan mea aaram se dekh paraha tha..

Mea chalte huye aage badaya tha..


Ke tabi muje mehsoos hua ki koi mera picha kar raha hea..

Par jab mea piche murke dekhta toa waha koi nai hota...

Aise he kuch kadam or chalne ke baad muje ye toa confirm hua ki koi toa he jo mera picha kar raha hea par mea apni ankho se usse dekhni paraha tha..

Mere piche sirf per he per the..

Mea jaise thoda aage bada ki tabi mere pero mea kuch bandne laga..

Mea gor se dekha toa wo pero ki jarre thi..

Or wo mere pero ko jakad kar band rahi thi..

Mene apne hatho se apne aapko churane ki kosis ki par jaise mea hilta toa un jaron ki pakad majboot hojati..

Mere pairo mea aisa lag raha tha ki wo abu kat jayengea itni majboot pakad thi..

Mene apne aap ko shant kiya..


Or sochne lagga ki kya karu..

Tab tak un jarro kq ghera mujhpar barne lagga or wo mere kamar tak aagayi thi..

Tabi mene apni  pit se apni talwar nikali..

Or un jaron ko katne lagga..


Jitna mea unka kaat tha utni he jarre or nikal thi jameen se..

Tabi mere dimag mea ek idea aaya or apne ek haath apne jole mea daal kar jinki mere kandhe par latak raha tha usmea jadibuti ke pani ki shisi nikali or us pani ko apne talwar par daal diya..

Wo pani talwar par daalne ke baad meane fir un jaron ko katna suru kiya..

Magar isbar jaha kahi be mere talwar lagti waha aag lag jati.


(Ye sab mene ved grantho ko padkar banana sikha tha)

Jisse jarre wapas nai aa pari thi mere pass.

Kuch he der mea mene un sabi jaron ko apne sarir se alag kar diya..

Mere aas pass sabi jarre jalkar khak ho chuki thi..

Or ab aur jarre b ni aarahi thi..

Insab se nipat kar mea fir aage badne lagga...

(Yaha batadu ki mene apne sath alag alag or b jadibutiyo ka pani laya hu..


Jo ki mene apne training ke doran bana na sikha tha or ye b unmea se ek thu..


Isse kisi b hathyar pe daal kar agar war kiya jaye toa uss jagha turant aag lag jati hea..

Aise he alag alag tarah ke pani mea apne sath laya hu)

Mea ab pehlea se jadda satark hokar chal raha tha..

Qki ab muje patta chal chuka he ki ye jungle jitna mene socha tha usse b kayi jadda khatarnak he..

Kuch dur aage jane par muje bohot he jadda garmi mehsoos hone laggi..

Aisa lag raha tha ki mea kisi jwala mukhi ke pass hu..

Muje ye baat thodi ajeeb lagi isliye mea ussi direction mea chalane lagga jaha se heat aarahi thi..

Waha pohach kar mene dekha ki mere saamne lawa ke nadi beh rahi hea..

Or us nadi ke ass pass registani mitti thi yani sand thi..

Ab muje lag raha tha ki hona ho us khanjar tak jaane ka raasta is lawa ke uss paar he hoga par iss par kaise karunga..

Fir mene jungle mea se ek bade ped ko apni talwar se katta or usee us nadi ke upar pool jaise rakh diya taki mea uss paar jaa saku..

Par ped rakhte he wo jal gaya wo b kuch he seconds mea..

Ab mea soch mea padhaya tha qki is nadi ko kisi b pool ke jariye paar karna asamnav tha..

Fir mere dimag idea aaya ki mea jump karke uspar challa jaau..

Isliye mea bhag kar kinare se jump kari par jump karte he mea hava me jane ke bajaye niche jane lagga..

Mea lava me girne he walla tha ki tabi mene kinare ko pakad liya..

Or muskil se upar aaya..

Lava ke itne pass jane se mere kapde jalne lagge or ab meare track pant jo pehna tha vo jalkar half pant hogaya tha..


(Sehen sakti ke training ke doran aise kai chije mene sai thi isliye lava ke pass hone se mere body par uska kuch effect nai hua par mea lava ke andar ni ja sakta tha..


Qki yadi mea jatta toa jal jatta)

Badi muskil se mea fir kinare ke upar aaya..

Ab mea pareshan hogaya tha ki ab isse par karu toa karu kaise..

Ab mea bechain hone lagga tha..

Tabi muje guru y ki baat yaad aayi ki shant dimag se sochna hoga muje..

Mene apne appko shant kiya or fir sochne lagga ki kya karu jisse mea us par ja saku..

Na mea kisi b chij ko as a bridge use kar sakta hu or na he mea jump kar ja sakta hu qki us mayavi chudail nea apne tilism sea waha ki gravity bada di hea..

Kuch der sochne par  b muje koi rasta nai najar aaraha tha us nadi ko par karneka..

Muje lagne lagga ki mea us khanjar ko nai paa sakunga tabi mene gusse mea sand ko mutti me pakad kar lava ke nadi mea phenka..

Or jo mene dekha ussea mea chaunk gaya tha..

Akhir aisa kya tha jaane ke liye nxt update ka intazar kare..

Or kuch suggestion ho toa za deana??
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RE: MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER) - by Aaryan99 - 23-11-2018, 10:32 PM



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