28-01-2020, 05:01 PM
Man, I love that in your story everything is connected. Your cats and dogs post was so brilliant I did not realize you were setting up Mahesh to take the cold drink all along which was so crucial. But it did not feel forced, The series of events before that are there to justify that moment.
Another thing I liked is You gave Shilpa enough chances. she did not surrender just like that. She hesitated to take anything Rahul offered but you made the conversation between Rahul and Shilpa in such manner that she ended up consuming those intoxicating substances to soothe her emotions.
The way Rahul seduced her is so dirty....too dirty. Good luck to any woman who is on Rahul's bad list. He trapped her in every possible way and none of those feel forced. Not anytime Shilpa acted stupidly before they touch each. The way Rahul took away her powers is so humiliating, slowly bit by bit he broke her. Fuck it was hot. He made her feel every moment what she is doing. The whole chapter felt like slow strip dance.
Thank you for this hot update. Patiently waiting for the next.
Another thing I liked is You gave Shilpa enough chances. she did not surrender just like that. She hesitated to take anything Rahul offered but you made the conversation between Rahul and Shilpa in such manner that she ended up consuming those intoxicating substances to soothe her emotions.
The way Rahul seduced her is so dirty....too dirty. Good luck to any woman who is on Rahul's bad list. He trapped her in every possible way and none of those feel forced. Not anytime Shilpa acted stupidly before they touch each. The way Rahul took away her powers is so humiliating, slowly bit by bit he broke her. Fuck it was hot. He made her feel every moment what she is doing. The whole chapter felt like slow strip dance.
Thank you for this hot update. Patiently waiting for the next.
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