13-01-2020, 11:56 PM
(13-01-2020, 08:32 PM)Krish World Wrote: Dear Manas,
I am sorry. Doing a raw translation of the story will not help get the real essence of it. If game40it do the translation, he can improve many areas of the story where he felt like changing after writing it and based on the user comments. That will help give a best version to the english readers. The stories 2,3 and 4 are written during the time when he started writing the stories. Slowly he would have improved his style before coming out with the last three stories. Story 3 is a very short one. i guess that is the first story he wrote.
@game40it: Your views please
In one area you are right. It won't be just a direct translation from me. I would add quite a bit of embellishments to the stories. I would do , A wife's dilemma (I think this more accurately describes the essence of the story that A Wife's distress) and He She Husband. I don't know about the others yet if I have a mind to do that. For me to do it it would not be immediate.