11-01-2020, 10:41 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-01-2020, 10:45 PM by chandamadam. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(11-01-2020, 12:12 PM)Sahrabi Wrote: Bhai mene aaj hi ye story full read ki he suru me plot bahut acha laga ye story karan ke jariye chal raha thaa fhir dhire tum ne 3rd larty ka usekiya waha story alag hogayi fhi abhi jo story chal rahi he wo puri 3rd party ke dwara sach kahu to pura plot hi change hogaya story ka wo filing hi nahi aaraha jo starting me aaraha thaa lagraha he koi porn dekh raha hu 3 some wala kahani raha hi nahi aur ha ye mera oponiyana he par yesa nhi he story acha nhi he bahut achey liktey ho tum bas story bhatak gayi plot se good luck for another update
I agree, Mr. Nightcralwer jayda soch rahe hai likhne se pehle. Gupta to story mai add karne ki koi zarurat nahi thi. Naya character add karna bhi tha to first time sex ke baad karna chahiye tha.
college dress theme ki bhi zarurat nahi thi. Phone pe Javed aur Neha ki baatein kafi lambi aur Neeras (boring) ho gyi.
Chanda
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