11-01-2020, 02:53 PM
yes... story is so nice... but story ka thda plot bhatak gaya aisa lag raha hai... karan ki feeling sinvolve kro..usko bhi kuch dikhao story me...nhi to ye 3sm story ho rahi hai...jo neha bata rahi hai aisa lag raha hai...
baki story writting bhut mast hai...plz continue writting
keep it up
baki story writting bhut mast hai...plz continue writting
keep it up