08-01-2020, 10:29 AM
(07-01-2020, 03:11 PM)Tamasu Wrote: Bro Kannu kalangiduchi bro semma end
Thanks bro
(07-01-2020, 03:15 PM)venkivenki Wrote: மிகவும் அருமையான கதை.... உரையாடல்... காதல்.... நட்பு.... காமம்.... அனைத்தும் தந்தமைக்கு நன்றி நண்பரே
Nandri nanba
(07-01-2020, 03:15 PM)selvaalion Wrote: அருமை
இதில் வரும் sex காட்சிகளை நீக்கிவிட்டு pratilipi போன்ற தளங்களில் பதிவிட்டால் உங்களுக்கு இன்னும் அதிகமான வாசகர்களும் கிடைப்பார்கள்.
ஆனால் எனக்கு sex காட்சிகளுடன் படிக்கவே பிடிக்கும்.
Aduthu oru story konjam differnt ah try pannitu irukken bro. Sex scenes ellame irukku but I am not going to use vulgar words in that, paarpom mudiyuthannu
(07-01-2020, 08:01 PM)krishkj Wrote:
Excellent climax nanba
Fantastic commercial mixing story
I felt like read a short novel
Nice characterization on Megha
Nice friendship bt little sad end on karthick but it's superb touch n feel for story lead...
Son name Karthick vachu semma feel panna vachu final line sonna kaneerum en kannalium vanthuchu semma feel
I think i ioo travel with the story...
Reality touches like disease explanation super boss
Keep rocking in upcoming story nanba...
Thanks bro. Start camera action ippo thaan bro start panni irukku that also will be emotional roller coaster of love and betrayal
(07-01-2020, 09:21 PM)prrichat85 Wrote: Sema ending mega twist and kid is super
Love and Happinessa is the best medicine
Thanks bro
(07-01-2020, 11:03 PM)Deva2304 Wrote: நல்ல முடிவு நண்பா
Nandri nanba
(08-01-2020, 12:53 AM)Jamesbogan Wrote: Super, i suspected it as double personality. But never expected this ending. You told that you doesn’ t change the story because some one guessed it. It is a good thing and thats what i wanted. Thats why i avoided to comment about my suspicions and expectations about the story. I wanted to see your whole imagination and didn’t want to interrupt it. But since you are ok with it. Shall i post that kind of comments in the future?
Dissociative Identity Disorder would have been more complex to explain. Also he would not have had conversation with Karthik and even more problematic would be who is taking control of the Mind. Before I start writing I would have complete story in Mind and would set the plot for that eventual climax. I make slight adjustments though if it doesn't deviate too much from what I had written in the previous posts for example this story would have had a different ending but changed it because I liked this new ending. Though its not major, the murder in episode 1 would still remain unsolved. Usually I don't reply to any of the guesses whether its right or wrong, If you think you are not spoiling it to others, no problem with me.
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