05-01-2020, 10:28 AM
(05-01-2020, 07:42 AM)Wtf99 Wrote: Apnar narration, setting, characters, dialogue oshadharon hoyechilo er ager update gula porjonto but ei notun character like baper friend, notun setting ba situation konotai ager update gular moto kinky ba hot hocche na. Ekta bhikhari bhikkha chaite eshe ek dobka milf teacher er buker dudh kheye gelo tari bashaye, college er bura peon classroom e drja janala bondho kore oi collegeer er respected teacher er dudh kochle kochle khelo ar tiplo, train e ek bura gorib stranger, train er conductor ar arek bhotka bura lok eki raat ek respected family er bouer dudh pet bhore kheyeo shesh korte parlo na. Prottekta scenario super creative, weirdly fun, kinky ar prochondo exciting. Ar ebarer gula? Shei same old adultery clichéd baper lompot friend ar tar friend ra ekta party te ma ke chudbe? How the fuck is it exciting? I don't wanna sound begatuve or rude man but im your story's oldest and biggest fan. Apni erokm ekbar ei update gula fiye praye ek bochor kono update denni. Ei notun arc ta interestibg na ektuo. Oi purono low class weird character ar kinky kinky breastfeeding scenario te ferot jan. If you need help with ideas. I'll help as best as I can if you want. Thsnks for restarting uour mastetpiece of a story sgain. Just change the characters start anew with a new arc.
Bujhlam.
Tobe Erokom episode thakbe majhe Majhe.
Eguloo oneke khub pochondo kore.