05-01-2020, 12:14 AM
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(04-01-2020, 11:27 PM)fasterboy Wrote: Don't mind author but I think you should. Move current affairs as you already described. Their first.penetrate. very long detailing about past making thread dull and.I am felt now distracting.
The story is erotically charged and very good told ... simply hot.
As well as,
I share the thoughts of "fasterboy" and have the concern thatthe story is stalled in the past.
The three main characters will and should find their way now and in the future. With or without each other.
We let ourselves be surprised ...
Lollobionda