Adultery My wife, why did she betray me (completed)

[game40it]

Dear game40it

I was a bit disappointed with the previous update dated 30/12/2019.  

I thought you will never write anything directly with Prabhu POV. The readers will constantly be guessing. Thought provocation will make the story very interesting. The moment I saw the Prabhu POV, I expected same flow and presentation as of Meera POV. It appeared to me, you were in hurry to complete the story and hence taken the short cut method.

It does not require any imagination that Prabhu will not forget Meera. Even if it is not for amazing sex he got from Meera, the treatment he received after abandoned temple sex  and turn of events in his life will never allow him forget Meera in his lifetime.  There is so no surprise in his remembering Meera.

However, what I expected is that you will elaborate how Prabhu compared his sex life with his wife not only with Meera but also with his past sex partners. I really missing the feeling of Prabhu's physiological conflict. One side his unsatisfied sexual desire for Meera. On the other side the fear of being exposed to wife and in-laws. Constantly feeling the pain of being abandoned by parents.  And moreover his coward act of not informing Meera, the very reason of his sudden departure. His pain, his frustration, his un-satisfaction, his fear and his agony all are missing in his POV.

My only request is pl don't be in hurry. You have beautifully portrayed Meera. Same treatment I do expect to the other characters namely Prabhu and Saravana. This story is not 100 mtr sprint. The strong point of this story is psychological conflict of the characters built on ground reality. Sexual descriptions are spicy additives.

The repeated unprotected sex and fear of pregnancy could have been easily avoided, as Prabhu could easily arrange birth control pills or sufficient condoms from nearby cities. The first time obviously had to be unprotected sex. Meera character does not allow her desirous to get pregnant by Prabhu. By same reasons, Prabhu also will try his best not to make Meera pregnant willingly.

The dramatic end result is not very difficult to imagine. However I will refrain myself from doing so.

Wish you and all the readers a beautiful year.

No, I am not intending to complete this story quickly. There is quite a bit of the story to go yet.  (of course it won't be never ending thereby becoming a uncompleted story) I am trying to write the story non sequentially (this is the first time I am trying that) and may seem to be moving too rapidly at times.  There are still many episodes left.

Prabu in-laws came and saw the grand daughter. Prabu is the only son and it was not told that whether his parents have any grand children through his sister. Anyways, Being the first grand child of the family, prabu parents or sister did not visit him to even take a look at it. How come this did not create any suspicion in the mind of prabu wife. He cannot give any reason for that. Secondly, after coming from Gulf, they should have ideally visited the home town and then planned on the starting of business in chennai. This too did not create any suspicion in the mind of prabu wife. Looks like she is also a fool like meera. A beauty without brains. 

Wait and see, the answers to this would come very late in the story. Can't divulge more now.  ;)