02-01-2020, 04:47 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-01-2020, 04:53 PM by nightcrawlertyagi. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(02-01-2020, 03:49 PM)chandamadam Wrote: Build up is too long in my view Mr. Nightcrawler. There was no reason to include college dress theme. Ladies does not have male ego to be humiliated. They accept reality better and quickly than gents.
Anyhow, continue as you like it.
Suggestion accepted
Dear
Chandamadam,
Kahani likhne me badi effort lagti hai. Aur ye story entertainment ke liye likhi ja rahi hai.. please do not relate in real life scenarios. May be real life me aisa na ho.... i think u dont like woman humiliation to satisfy male ego. I dont have any intention. But thanks for your suggestions.
NightCrawler
Thanks