02-01-2020, 03:49 PM
(02-01-2020, 12:11 PM)nightcrawlertyagi Wrote: Note: readers thode comments kam aa rahe hai.. mujhe pata nahi chal pa raha ki mein sahi jaa raha hoon ki nahi.....
Apke support ki bahut jaroorat hai.... kahani likhne me bahut takleef hoti hai .... bahut time waste hota hai... agar aap support karenge... to aur likhne me mazza aayega....
Aaapke comments aur suggestions ka swagat hai......
Aapka
NightCrawler.
Build up is too long in my view Mr. Nightcrawler. There was no reason to include college dress theme. Ladies does not have male ego to be humiliated. They accept reality better and quickly than gents.
Anyhow, continue as you like it.