Adultery My wife, why did she betray me (completed)

[Krish World]

In the first line, is that not Prabu's eyes? Interesting update.
So prabu has a daughter. His sister/mother also did not visit him?

Prabu also thinking about Meera. He is cheating his wife and making love with her thinking about Meera. Here, Meera is making love with Saravanan thinking about prabu. The lovers cannot forget each other. I think it will be a difficult case for saravanan when he learns that prabu still yearns for Meera and he already knows that Meeras has lost her heart to prabu. Prabu wife will surely know the truth after reaching the town through his mother in law and move out of his life. Saravanan will unite Meera and Prabu and move out of the town. Poor guy. He does not have any other option as he already seen his wife longing for prabu in spite of all his efforts to turn her as old Meera.

Good that you decided to write in English first.
Its better you complete the story in English first and then translate it to Tamil later.
I think the story in English has better response/views than in Tamil.