30-12-2019, 09:42 PM
Great writing... i think the milkman part was not fitting into this. It ould have been better without the milkman part too. Anyways... nice story and waiting for more updates. I understand that bringing a climax to such story is a mammoth task and i wish to see how the author manages it.
I liked most of the parts in the story. Especially the one when they all took chances on her for the first time.. congrats...
I have written a story too named "the village with strange wedding". Do read it and comment your feedbacks...
I liked most of the parts in the story. Especially the one when they all took chances on her for the first time.. congrats...
I have written a story too named "the village with strange wedding". Do read it and comment your feedbacks...