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Adultery जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी
(26-12-2019, 12:08 PM)komaalrani Wrote: Thanks for enjoying , we all know that JKG is not a story , it is closer to a novel with many dimensions , multiple characters and happening at many places. so when the story moves to His Maykaa , certainly story of township like Ms Moitra and her young teen daughters will go to back burner but only temporarily , and when the story will come back where we are now, again characters, actions change ,... more aka Phagun ke Din Chaar ,... this one is even bigger than that .... 


Thanks so much for enjoying the revamp.

will try to post two to three times , every week ... and comments like your certainly push me to write and post more ....

Comments do help
Yes...it has much larger canvas than phagun ke din chaar.
And each time you justify characters presence with quick witted response and dialogues among themselves and even time and place with graphic, deep/obscure details.
thanks for considering to increase the pace.
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ANUSHKA IS ASHWIN'S SWEET WIFE - by ashw - 05-04-2019, 06:02 AM
RE: जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी - by chodumahan - 26-12-2019, 10:35 PM



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