18-12-2019, 08:27 PM
Namaste,
umid hai ki aap acche ho,
aap ki kahani bahoot hi acchi hai \ aap age bhi ishe likhte rahe \
lakhek se niveden:-
jab hum kisi ke samne hote hai to bolke uski tarif karna bahut hi assan hai, lakin likhne me bahut mehnat karni parti hai \ bola hua hum bhool sakte hai, lakin likhe hua to nahi (waise ek bat batau, ye sab likhte wakt maine keybord me subse jayada "Delete" type kiya hai \ aap apni kahani apne hi tarike se hi likhiya \ agar kisi ko Incest hi padhna hai to site pe 1000+ se bhi jayada story hai, lakin is jaise story bahoot kum hai \ aap please niras na ho or likhte jaye.
Kuch suggestion:-
(1) sidhe hi sex schene me naa jake app kahani me thora sa romance laa sakte hai \ is-se kahani me jaan bani rahigi or comment bhi aate rahenge \
(2) Anu madem ya kahani me koi nayi Girl le aao jo ki Hero ko tease kare \ use pana chahe, lakin hero us-se door bhi hona chahe or door bhi na jaa paye \
ye bat sahi hai ki jub kahani me sex chal raha ho, to kaphi log comment karte hai \ mera ye matlab bilkul bhi nahi hai ki kahani boring hai bina sex ke \ lakin ye bhi goor karne layak baat hai \
unt me yahi ki, niras na ho or aage likhte rahe \
Please Update
umid hai ki aap acche ho,
aap ki kahani bahoot hi acchi hai \ aap age bhi ishe likhte rahe \
lakhek se niveden:-
jab hum kisi ke samne hote hai to bolke uski tarif karna bahut hi assan hai, lakin likhne me bahut mehnat karni parti hai \ bola hua hum bhool sakte hai, lakin likhe hua to nahi (waise ek bat batau, ye sab likhte wakt maine keybord me subse jayada "Delete" type kiya hai \ aap apni kahani apne hi tarike se hi likhiya \ agar kisi ko Incest hi padhna hai to site pe 1000+ se bhi jayada story hai, lakin is jaise story bahoot kum hai \ aap please niras na ho or likhte jaye.
Kuch suggestion:-
(1) sidhe hi sex schene me naa jake app kahani me thora sa romance laa sakte hai \ is-se kahani me jaan bani rahigi or comment bhi aate rahenge \
(2) Anu madem ya kahani me koi nayi Girl le aao jo ki Hero ko tease kare \ use pana chahe, lakin hero us-se door bhi hona chahe or door bhi na jaa paye \
ye bat sahi hai ki jub kahani me sex chal raha ho, to kaphi log comment karte hai \ mera ye matlab bilkul bhi nahi hai ki kahani boring hai bina sex ke \ lakin ye bhi goor karne layak baat hai \
unt me yahi ki, niras na ho or aage likhte rahe \
Please Update