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Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER)
#2
Update 1


Rajasthan mea udaipur ke pass he ek bada he khubsurat sa gaav he



Ratangadh

Ratangadh apne prakritik saundarya ke liye kafi mashoor hea..


Suraj ke ujale mea ye gaav kisi sonapur se kam nai lagega or raat me chand ke chandni me toa jaise hazaro jugnuoo ka dera ho..


Aisa lagta hea..

Or in sab ki shaan badata he yaha ke raajo ki haveli jaha par aaj b raaj pariwar rehta hea..

Kehne ko toa raaj shasan khatam hogaya he par ratangadh or aas pass ke 56 gaavo me aaj be ratangadh ke raaj pariwar ka sashan chaltay...

Or is raaj pariwar ki shan or yaha ke praja ki jaan hea Sohanlal singh joki is gaav ke nove raaja hea...

Sohanlal singh ne apne pure rajya ko bakhubi sambal rakha hea..


Inka ek or bhai b hea jo ki Australia mea rehta he apni family ke saath...

Sohanlalji ko 18 saal ke umar mea he raaja gosit kiya gaya tha qki us waqt inke pitaji ki mrityu ranbhumi mea dusmano se ladte waqt hui thi..

Sohanlalji ke 4 bete or 1 beti hea..


Jinme sea kisiko b ab tak beta nai hua tha isliye wo kafi pareshan rehtea the ..

Qki unko apna waris ghosit karna tha or wo unko pota he hosakta tha


Is baat ko raajguru ne kahi thi..

Par ab tak unke kisi b bete ko ladka nai hua tha..

Vo har roj baghwan se prathna karte ki unko apne raajya ka waris miljaye..


Aise he din bit rahe the ab tak unke 2 bade beto or 1 beti ki shadi hochuki thi or insabi ko he ladkiya hu hui thi..

Fir ek din inke 4th bete bharat ne bhag kar shadi karli...


Qki jis ladki se unhone shadi ki thi ek toa wo dusre dhram ki thi or upar se soha lalji ke dusman ki beti thi...

Isliye Bharat ne bhag kar shadi ki or Goa mea shift hogaya apne patni ke sath...

Inhone bohot kosis ki thi pitaji ko manane ki par we mane nai isliye dono ne bhag kar shadi ke..


Inke patne ka naam lalita he or in dono ke shadi lalita ke chote bhai mahaveer ne karwayi thi..

Apne bete ke jaane ke baad sohanlalji ko kafi dukh hua ki unka he beta unke sath bagawat kar gaya hea..

Unhone kabi b apne bete se naa toa milne ki kosis ki or naa he kabi usse baat karne ki kosis ki..

Unhone toa apne bete ko mrit gosit kardiya tha...

Aise he din bite or unke 5th ladke ki b shadi hogayi..

Or unke sabi bache apne apne ghar grihasthi me khush the..

Par ab tak unke kisi b bache ko ladka nai hua tha..

Or bharat ka inke pass koi b khabar ni thi..

Or dusri taraf bharat lalita ne shadi ke baad Goa mea settle hogaye the..

Yaha mahaveer ne unki madad ki thi joki lalita ka chota bhai hea..

Goa mea bharat nea mahaveer or ek or partner ke sath milkar jewellery ka business start kiya or 6 mahino me he unka business  kafi  acha chalne lagga


Or ab bharat ne khudka banglow banwaliya tha..

In 6 mahino mea bharat ne bohot kosis ki apne pitaji ko manane ki par unke beje gaye kisi b patra ka jawab ni aaya tha..

Or ek din unko apne pitaji ki or se letter aaya ki bharat unke liye mar chuka he or agar kabi b usne apne pita ki thodi b izzat ki ho toa kabi b apni sakal na dikhaye unhe..

Is letter ke baad kabi b bharat ne koi b kosis na ki apne pitaji se milne ki...

Or apna sarra dyan apna business empire setup karne mea lagga diya..

Isi bich lalita pregnant hui or unko ladka hua..

Par bharat toa abb apne business empire khada karne mea itna kho gaya tha ki usse iss baat se jada koi farak ni padda..

Ladke ka naam Aaryan rakha gaya..


Lalita ko beta hua he ye baat jab lalita ke maata pita ko khabar padi toa unhone apni narajgi dur karte huye lalita or bharat ko apna liya par ab tak is baat ke bareme Sohanlal ko koi b khabar ni thi...

Jab Aaryan ka janam hua tha ussi waqt dharti se dur ek alag he jagah thi jaha par sab kuch sone se bana hua tha..


Wahi ek bohot he khubsurat mehel mea 2 log aapas me baat kar rahe the..


Jinme ek ladki or ek aadmi tha..

Ladki - Pitaji aaj khushi ka din hea.. aakhir usne fir janam lea he liya hea..

Aadmi - Sahi ka beti..


Bohot lamba samay lea liya ussne lotne mea...


Par usko apne or apne atit ke bareme kuch b patta ni hoga

Ladki - Par pitaji dushmano ko agar uske janam ke bareme pata chala toa bohot muskil hojayegi..


Mea isbar usse ni kho sakti pitaji..

Aadmi - Isbar usse harana aasan ni hoga..


Pichli baar se kai guna jadda taqatwar he wo isbar par ussne apne shaktiyo ko paa na hoga..


Rahi baat dushmano ki toa jab tak wo apni talwar ni hasil karleta tab tak uske bareme kisiko b kuch b pata ni chalega..


Or uski safety ke liyea..


Uske dono rakshak ne b fir janam liya hea dharti lok par..


Wo dono uske saath he rahenge..

Ladki - Acha he pitaji..

Aise he waqt bitta gaya ab aaryan 3 saal ka hochuka tha..


Lalita ek baar fir pregnant hui or isbar b usse ek ladka hua jiska naam Divyesh rakha gaya...

In 3 saalo mea bharat ne apna business kafi expand karliya tha aaj uske pass kisi b chij ke kami ni thi..


Unhone is waqt me kabi b apne pitaji se milne ya baat karne ke kosis nai ki thi..

Divyesh ke janam hote he wo jada samay ghar par bitane lagge..

Jisse divyesh ke sath wo jadda der rukte..


Or ab samay aisa aagaya tha ki divyesh unko aaryan se jadda pyara hogaya tha..

Aaryan ke sath muskil se waqt gujarte wo..

Isi bich mahaveer ki b shadi hogayi thi meena se joki arrange marriage thi..

Mahaveer meena ke sath mumbai mea rehta tha par kabi kabi goa aajata apne behen or bhanje se milne ke liyea..

Bharat ne ab ek naya banglow banwaya tha joki kafi sundar or badda..

Ye banglow ek colony mea tha jaha total 11 banglow bane huye the jisme se ek bharat ka tha joki colony ke starting mea tha or ek mahaveer ka jo ki colony ke end mea tha..

Bharat ke banglow ke baju me ek or banglow tha jaha par rajwardhan or unki patni roshni rehte the..


Inke ek beti thi jo ki aaryan ke age ke he thi jiska naam Nikki tha..

Yaha par shift hone ke baad lalita or roshni ke aapas me dosti hogayi or dono pakki saheliyon ban gayi thi..

Aaryan or nikki b sath me khel the the saara waqt ...

Dono ki apass mea achi ban ti thi..

Aise he kuch mahine or bite or aaryan ke janam din ke ek din pehlea lalita ka car accident mea death hogayi thi..

Aaryan ko bachpan se he sirf maa ka pyaar he mila tha isliye wo apni maa ke death ke baad sadme mea chalagaya tha..

Aaryan na kuch bolta na kuch khata..


Uski halat kafi buri hogayi thi isliye mahaveer or meena ne aaryan or divyesh ki custody lena ka socha qki bharat akela 2no bacho ni sambal sakta tha..

Par bharat ne iss baat se inkar kar diya or dusri shadi ki taki divyesh ko usse koi na lea sake..

Aaryan ka toa unhe koi fikar nai thi qki unhone suru se he aaryan ke sath kabi waqt he ni bitaya tha..

Par Mahaveer se aaryan ki ye halat dekhi na gayi isliye wo aaryan ko apne sath le jana chahta tha par aaryan apne ghar ko chodkar kahi nai gaya..

Ab waqt ke sath aaryan ka b haal tk hone lagga par wo kisi sea jadda baat ni karta tha bas khane ke waqt apne kamre se bahar aata baki pure din apne kamre mea he rehta bas kabi agar Nikki aajati toa usske sath thoda khel leta baki fir gumsum sa betha rehta..

Aise he kuch mahine bite or aaryan ki step mom riya ko ek ladki hui jiska naam kajal rakha gaya..

Jab Aaryan ne riya ko dekha toa aaryan ke chere par fir vo khushi aagayi thi joki uske maa ke jane ke baad kahi kho gayi thi..

Par uski step mom usko kajal ke pass b ni aane deti..


Unko aaryan bilkul b pasand ni tha naa jane q par unko nafrat thi aaryan se..

Divyesh ko toa wo apna beta manti or usse kabi ye mehsoos ni hone diya ki wo uski sagi maa ni hea par aaryan ke sath aisa ni tha...

Aaryan fir b chup chupke kajal ke sath khel leta or jab kabi b uski s mom usse pakad thi toa khub khari khoti sunati...

Kajal ke aane ke baad aaryan fir pehlea jaisa hone lagga tha ab bas kajal or nikki ke sath uske din gujar rahe the..

Aise he wo 6 saal ka hogaya or aaj uske college ka 1 st day hea..

Aaryan nea apna bag kal he pack kar rakha tha or ready hokar bag leke dining table par agaya..

Dining table par uske mom dad or dono bhai behen b the..

Aaryan ke aate he uske dad bole..

Dad - Aaryan aaj college ka 1st day hea koi complain ji aani chahiye b a good boy or driver tumhe college chod dega or lea b aayega..

Apni dad ki baat sun kar aaryan udas hogaya tha qki wo apne dad ke sath college jana chahta tha qki aaj 1st day tha..

Khair usne nasta kiya or apna bag lekar bahar aagaya jaha driver gadi lekar khada tha..


(Driver ko d chacha likhunga..


Ye mid aged person the par family me paiso ke kami ke wajase ye kaam karte the


Ye inke family ke sab se purane driver hea)

D chacha - Chalo aaryan baba college ke liye deri hojayegi..

Gate kholte huye d chacha bole..

Aaryan bina kuch bole bas haa me sar hila kar gadi me back seat par baith gaya..

Ghadi start huyi or banglow ke bahar he nikli thi ki nikki gadhi ke aage aagayi or gadhi ko rukwa liya..

Gadhi ke rukte he wo back seat ka door open karke apne dono hath kamar par rakhkar boli..

Nikki - Q be motu rukni sakta tha kya mere liyea thodi der..(Aaryan thoda chuby boy tha)


Aaryan toa Nikki ko dekhte he usmea kho gaya tha kafi cute lagrahi thi college uniform mea or upar se uske bolne ka tarika..

Nikki ki maa riya ke awaj se aaryan ka dyan tuta..

Riya - Nikki tuje kitni baar kaha hea aaryan se ache se baat kiya kar ye kya bolne ka tarika hota hea..

Aaryan - Janne do choti maa iski toa aadat hea..


Muje bura ni lagga bilkul b..


Or tu chuhiya jaldi beth gadhi me der hojayegi nai toa..


(Riya ko me choti maa bolta hu qki unhone he mom ke death ke baad muje maa ka pyaar diya tha s mom toa mujse nafrat he karti thi)

Meri or apni maa ke baat sun Nikki mu fula kar gadhi mea beth gayi tab uski maa boli..

Riya - aaryan apna or iska dyan rakhna..


Or pehlea din kisiko tang mat karna nikki..

Hamdono ne fir bye kaha choti maa ko fir chal pade college ke taraf..


Sry frnds story ko thoda starting mea fast forward kiya hea..


Taki jaldi majedar part suru kar saku..


Or kuch suggestion ho toa jarur dena..


Mea kuch changes kiye he characters mea jisse story ko or behtar kar saku..

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