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Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER)
#60
UPDATE 41

Toa guys ye story ek mahine ke pause ke baad ab mea continue jaa rahi hu..

Toa pichle update mea aap sabi ne dekha tha ki kaise aaryan ko apne pita or bhai ki mrityu par yaad satay jati hea ye jane bagair ki waha kya hua hea..
Isi wajase aarayn or rosel dono ke bich jo takrav hua tha wo b mit jata hea or aaryan b rosel ki friendship kabul kar leta hea..
Wahi rosel ko aarayn ka rahasya pata chal jata hea..

Ab aage..

Mea rosel se baat kar kafi halka mehsoos kar raha tha ki jaise mere dil se koi bohot bada bhar utar gaya ho..

Par muje ye baat b khaye jaa rahi thi ki aaj achanak muje papa or bhai ki yaad kaise aayi..
Aisa ni tha ki mea unse pyaar ni karta tha par yaad aana wo b is tarha ye pehli baar hua tha..

Khair mene apna focus kal par shift kiya jaha muje black dragons ke area me jakar mt.thunder par charna tha..

Or kal ke liye muje aaram ki b jarurat thi isliye mene rosel ko kal milne ka bolkar apne kamre mea aagaya..

Rosel jana toa ni chahti thi par wo majbur thi qki meri kahi baate b sahi thi..

Mea apne kamre mea sogaya tha..

Wahi black dragons ke taraf ankit ke waha se lout aaneke baad drakuna kafi khush tha..
Chalo dekhte hea iski khushi ka karan kya tha..

Drakuna apne sainiko se baate karte huye has raha tha or is waqt wo sabi insani roop mea hi the..

Drakuna - ha ha ab un white dragons par hamara raaj hoga..
Bohot jald wo sabi hamari gulami karenge..
Bas hamare dost(ankit) ne jis prakar bataya he us prakar kal hojaye toa ham sabi ko us thunder crown ki koi jarurat ni hogi..
Sabi dragons par raaj karne ke liye..
Bas kal ka intazar hea muje..

Itna bol drakuna apne dragon roop mea aakar aasman ke taraf mu kar dhadte huye aag ke gole phekne lagga..

Wahi parilok mea creator or unki beti(karishma) aapas me baat kar rahe the..

Karishma - Pitaji aaryan kahi in sab ke chakkar mea musibat mea na par jaye..
Wo kamini usse bas istemal kar rahi hea apne badle ke liye..

Creator - nai beta aisa ni hea wo jo kuch b kar rahi hea wo aarayn ke or is pure universe ke bhale ke liye he kar rahi hea..
Agar usne uss samay aaryan ki aatma ko naa thama hota toa sayad aaryan ki aatma hamare dusman ke hato mea aajati fir aage kya hota wo tum b jaan ti ho..

Wahi usne(tigress) na jane kitne warsi tak aaryan ke aatma ki raksa ki is pure sansar se apna naata tor..
Or jab sahi samay aaya toa usi ke wajase aaryan ka punar janam hua hea..

Karishma - par pitaji aapne dekha na kaise wo aaryan ke jindagi ko control kar rahi hea..
Aaryan ko ye baat na pehlea pasand thi naa ab hogi..
Or jab usse is sachai ka pata chalega tab kya hoga..

Creator - muje b isi baat ki fikar he beta par muje usspar (tigress) pura barosa hea wo sab kuch sambhal legi..

Or yaha white dragons ke mehel mea mea apne kamre mea soya hua tha tabi muje apne upar bhar mehsoos hua..

Aisa lagraha tha ki jaise koi mere chest par soya ho..
Par mea abi b nind mea tha or muje lagga mea abi apne ghar mea hu or kajal meare upar soyi hui hea..

Isliye nind mea he mene b usse apne baho mea kas liya or apne sine se dabba sogaya..

Par wo jo koi b tha wo meri iss harkat ke karan kafi khus tha or mere chest par apna sar rakh apne ek haath se chest par gol gol ungliyon guma rahi thi..

Jisse muje kafi guddi ho rahi thi or mene b nind mea he usse gud gudi karna suru kar diya..

Jispar wo khil khila ke hasne laggi or mujse rukne ko kehne lagi..

Jab usne muje rokne ke liye muje awaj di tab meane jatse apni ankhe kholdi or mere samne ek side se mere gale lage huye sakhs ko dekh mea chounk gaya tha..

Par tabi mea kuch bol pata usse pehlea he usne apne hoth mere hoto se jod diye or jor jor se choosne lagi..

Mene survat me toa usse apne se dur karna chaha par usne apne baho ka ghera mere gardan ke taraf kas liya or jada wildly kiss karne laggi jisse mera b sabar ka baand tutpada or mene b response dena suru kiya..

Par abi hame kuch he der hui thi kiss karte huye ki mene uss shaks ko dhakka detay huye khudse alag kiya or kas kar ek tamacha uske gal par lagga diya..


Sry kal update ni dea payi..
Kuch jaruri kaam mea atak gayi thi..
Isliye aaj shubhe he mene update dene ka socha isliye purane updates read kar ye update likha hea..

Muje jarur batayega ki mea aarayn jaise ye story likh rahi hu yaa nai..
Jisse muje pata chale ki muje ye story continue karni chahiye ya nai..
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RE: MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER) - by sarit11 - 27-01-2019, 12:49 PM



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