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Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER)
#58
Update 39

Ham dono maidan ke bich pohach gaye..
Or side mea sagar or uske mom dad b the jo ki apni takht parbethe the..

Mere hath mea jo talwar thi ussea dekh toa s papa b shock hogaye the..

Tabi mene rosel ko kaha jiske hath se pehlea talwar giregi wo harega ..

Rosel ne b tk hea kaha..

Or usne ek sainik ke taraf ishara kiya or muje boli..
Toa tayar ho..
Mene b haa kaha tabi us sainik ne shank nath phuka or tabi

Ab aage...

Tabi rosel ek dam se talwar lekar mere taraf lapki or pura jor lagakar usne mere chest par var karna chaha..

Bhale he mea iske liye tayar ni tha par jaise he rosel ne talwar ka var karna chaha mea turant piche hat gaya..

Par deri hone ke karan wo talwar mere T-shirt par ek cut kar gayi or thora bohot skin par b chu gayi jisse waha se khun aane lagga tha..

Par rosel yahi nai ruki usne fir aage bad mere sar par hamla karna chaha par isbar mea tayar tha..

Or uske talwar muje chuti usse pehlea mene apni talwar se uska var rok diya..

Par fir b wo apna jor laga rahi thi talwar se piche dakelne mea.

Or boli..

Kya hua..
Itni he talwar baji aati hea..
Abi b har man jau waqt hea..
Nahi toa kahoge mene dusra moka no diya..

Uski is baat par mea sirf muskura diya or jaha wo muje piche dakel na cha rahi thi wahi mene usse halka sa dhakka de piche ke taraf kardiya..

Or apna fighting stance lea liya..
Jisse dekh rosel kafi chounk gayi thi..
Or man me boli..

Nahi ye kaise ho sakta ye toa sirf wo he kar sakta tha..
Nai ye ni ho sakta..

Or achanak he usse kya hua patta ni wo ek dam se teji se mere taraf baghi or apna pura jor lagakar mujpar waar karne lagi..

Wo ek ke baad ek waar kar rahi thi..
Or mea sirf block he kiye jaa raha tha..
Wahi uske pita b shok the par uski waja kya thi pata nai ..

Par sagar se ye sab ni dekha gaya or usne apne pita ko ye fight rokdene ko kaha..

Sayad usse andaja hogaya tha ki rosel ke dimag me kya chal raha hea..
Isliye wo dara hua tha..

Or yaha rosel rukne ka naam he nai lea rahi thi lagatar var par var kiye ja rahi thi..
Or ye karte waqt uske ankho me se aasu b beh rahe the jisse mene dekh liya..

Or najane q muje uske aansu dekhe ni gaye or jab wo mujpar war karne ke liye apne talwar ko upar ki..

Tabi mene jatse usse gale laga liya..
Rosel ko toa hosh ni tha ki wo kya kar rahi thi..
Uske dimag me kya chal raha tha kya pata..
Par mere gale lagate he vo ekdam shant hogai..
Or uske hatho se uski talwar niche girgayi..

Uske mom dad ko ye sab dekh kuch samaj he ni aaraha tha wahi sagar kafi gahrayi hua tha..

Rosel toa mere gale lagne se pata ni kya hogaya usne b muje kaskar apni baho mea bhar liya ..
Or na jane kya kya bole ja rahi thi..

Mea toa usse bas shant karna chahta tha par wo kya bol rahi thi meri samaj mea kuch ni aaraha tha..

Phir achanak he rosel meri baho me he behosh hogai jisse dekh sagar samet uske mom dad apni jagha se khare hogaye or hamare taraf aane lage..

Wo log jab tak hamare pass pohach te mene usse apni baho me utha liya tha..

Rosel ki maa usko uh behosh dekh gabra gayi thi jisse sagar ne sambhala..
Or fir sagar or uski maa ne rosel ko apne kamre tak leagaye.

Yaha piche bas mea or sagar ke dad he bache the..
Jo ki kuch soch rahe the or bole..

S dad - beta tum uski fikar mat karo usse kuch ni hua hea..
Muje ye batao ki tumne larna kaha se sikha..

Qki tumhe larta dekh itna toa pata chal gaya hea ki tum kafi trained ho..

Mea ab unhe sab bata b ni sakta tha qki sagar ne meri pehchan b adhuri batayi thi yaha..

Isliye mene bas itna kaha ki..

Aise he uncle training li thi..
Socha kabi kaam aayegi..

S dad mera jawab sun muje uh dekhne lage jaise mene koi bohot bara juth bol diya ho..
Par mene apne chere par confidence banaye rakha..
Jisse dekh wo b kuch bol ni paye or ham log mehel mea wapas aagaye..

Mehel mea aa me apne kamre mea aagaya..
Or bed par betha he tha ki muje achanak kuch yaad aaya or mea sagar ke kamre ke taraf chal diya jo ki mere room se kuch rooms chorkar he tha..

Waha sagar toa nai par ankit milgaya jisse muje kaam tha..
Uske pass jaa mene usse pucha .

Bhai sach sach batana mea or rosel jab lar rahe the tab tu kaha tha..
Qki muje pata he ki tu lunch ke baad he kahi chala gaya tha..

Ek toa mea ek dam se kamre mea gussa or upar se achanak se kiye gaye sawal se ankit gabra gaya..
Or jo ni bolna chahiye tha wo boldiya ki..

Bha..bhai mea wo black dragons ke area mea gaya tha..

Jab ankit ko ehsas hu wo kya bol gaya tab tak der ho chuki thi..
Or ankit ke baat sun mea chouk gaya tha qki jaha tak inhone bataya tha wahase koi jinda ni aata he fir ye gaya q or waha se bina kisi musibat mea fase kaiseaaaya..

Par mea aage kuch bolta usse pehlea he piche se sagar ki awaj aai..

Oye ankit tuje kaha tha black dragons par najar rakhne ko or tu yaha baitha hea..
Bulgaya hame kal waha jaana hea..

Itna bol sagar ne piche se he ankit ko kuch ishara kiya jisse wo samaj gaya or bola..
Ha bhai mea wahi se aaya hu abi..
Waha par filal toa kuch khas ni horaha hea..
Mera matlab unhe abi tak hamare plan ke bareme kuch pata ni chala hea .

Meane undono ki baate suni par fir b muje kuch aat pata sa lag raha tha par mea kya bolta isliye mea waha se badme baat karne ka bol waha se nikal gaya..

Yaha mere room se nikal ne ke baad sagar ne aakar ankit ke sar par ek tapli ari or bola..

Gadhe kahi ke tuje kitni baar kaha he soch samaj kar bola kar..
Abi mea ni aata toa tune toa banta dhar kar lena tha plan ka..
Upar se rosel ko b shak hogaya he aaryan par..

Ankit - Bhai agar rosel ne aaryan ko kuch b bata diya toa garbar hojayegi..

Sagar - sahi kaha tune..
Ho na ho sayad ab tak toa usse ye esas b hogaya hoga..
Kuch toa karna parega or waha black dragons ke taraf sab tk heana..
Kahi unko shak toa nai hua ki tu hamare taraf se hea..

Ankit - nai bhai unhe toa bas mea unka shub chintak lag raha hu..
Or us drako ko toa mujpar bohot wiswas hogaya hea isliye ek bar me he usne maan liya ki mea unki taraf hu or yaha unka khabri hu..

Yaha mea sagar
ke kamre se nikal kar ke yuhi waha tehel raha tha apni soch me gum ki tabi muje rosel ka kamra dikha..

Jisme rosel pit ke bal bed par leti hui thi..
Or sayad abi b behosh thi..
Aisa muje lagga.

Fir b mera man hua ki ek bar usse dekh lu isliye mea uske kamre me dakhil hua

Mea uske bed ke pass pohach uske bagal mea bethgaya or uske khubsurat chere ko dekh raha tha..

Najane kya tha usme jab b usko dekhta toa meri sari tnsn kahi gul hojati..

Mere dimag mujse yahi keh raha tha ki jarur ye meri apni hea koi isliye muje iske taraf itna khichav mehsoos horaha hea.

Isliye mene uske sir par pyaar se hath pehra or bola .

Kya hea tumme aisa jo muje tumhare taraf khich raha hea..
Mea toa tumhe janta b ni fir b kuch apna pan sa lagraha hea..

Sayad he koi naata tumse purana..
Ya yuhi mera dil machal raha hea..

Ye sab mene usse sota huaa samaj bola tha par meri ye baate sun rosel ne jatse muje gale laga liya..

Usne ye sab achanak se kiya jisse me hadbada gaya tha..
Par uski baat sun toa mea puri tarha hil gaya tha..

Rosel - Q chorkar chalegaye the muje tum aaru..q..
Tumhare janeke baad toa mene jaise jina he chor diya tha..
Par muje wiswas tha mera aaru jarur mere pass wapas lotega or dekho tum wapas aagaye..
Mea ab kahi nai jane dungi tumhe.

Itna bol wo mere face par har taraf chumne lagi or mea toa uski baate sun shock tha ki ye kya bol rahi hea..
Par tabi usne mere hotho par kiss karna shuru kiya jisse mea apni soch se bahar aaya or usse khud se dhaka dekar alag kiya or bola.

Ye kya behudi harkat hea..
Tum mere dost ki behen ho..
Or kaan kholkar sunlo mea koi aaru vaaru nai hu.

Aainda mere karib b aai toa dekhna..

Itna bol mea wahase nikal garden ke taraf apne aap ko relax karne ke liye .

Mere kamre ke jaane ke baad rosel jor jor se rone lagi..
Or apne aap se boli.

Chahe kitna b bura balla bol lo tum aaru par tum he mere aaru ho..
Or mea tumhe purani sabi baate yaad dilakar rahungi..

Itna soch wo apne kamre se bahar nikal ne he wali thi ki sagar ne uska rasta roka..

Rosel toa is waqt kuch sunna he nai chahti thi
Usse toa bas apna aaru chahiye tha..
Par sagar ko apne samne dekh usse gussa aane lagga.
Or boli..

Bhaiya mere raaste se hatjau..
Muje mere aaru ke pass jana hea .

Uski baate sun sagar samaj gaya tha ki aaryan ka sach isse pata chal gaya hea par kuch b kar isse abi rokna hoga ..

Sagar ko soch mea duba dekh rosel usse dakha dete huye aage badne lagi..

Tabi sagar ne usse pichese kaha..

Rosel Aaryan ko abi apne pichle janam ke bareme kuch ni patta or yadi tumne usse uske pichle janam ne gathi ghatnao ke bareme kuch b bataya toa unhe iske bareme pata chal sakta he ki aaru fir se agaya hea..
Or tum jaanti hi fir kya hoga..
Or upar se aaryan ko apni sari taqato ke bareme pata b ni hea..

Sagar ke baate sun rosel ke per wahi tham gaye..

Or wo dhadham se ghutno ke bal gir gayi or rone lagi..
Or sagar usse chup karane lagga

Rosel - nai bhai mea aaru ko fir nai kho sakti isbar agar aisa hua toa mea marjaungi bhai..

Sagar apni behen ki ye halat dekh bohot dukhi tha or man me..

Sry behena maaf karna par aaryan ki safety jaruri hea..
Qki abi tak usse b ni patta ki uska asli dusman kon hea..

Yaha dharti par in ghar 1..

Dinner ka tym ho chala tha or papa or s mom dining table par beth dinner kar rahe the ..
Tabi dad bole .

Divyesh ni aaya dinner. Par..

Smom - Ha usne pehlea he kha liya tha..
Abi apne kamre mea he hea..

Papa - Riya aaj aaryan ki or kajal ki bohot yaad aarahi hea..
Kaise honge wo dono laksdweep par..

Smom - hmm..wo toa hea

Smom ka jawab sun papa b achambhit the qki unhone aaryan ke liye unke muh se sirf buri baate he suni thi .

Dad in mind .
Aaryan maaf karna mere bache mea tumhe kabi ek baap ka pyaar ni dea paya par ek baar tum trip se lota fir mea tumhe apne pass he rakhunga..
Waise b ab mea sayad jadda din na ji pau..
Cancer ke wajase..
Par jitne b din ho mea tumhe ab apne pass he rakhunga or agar na b rakh paya toa sayad mea is duniya ka sabse badnaseeb baap hounga..
Par meri aakhri ichaa tumhi puri kar sakte ho or sayad jarur karogea.

Itne soch dad ki aankhe nam hogayi thi par unhone s mom ke dekhne se pehlea unhe saaf kar liya tha..

Or yaha jungle mea agoriyo ke beje bando ne apne taraf se saari tayari kar li thi bas unhe ab plan ko execute karna tha..
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