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Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER)
#57
Update 38

Apne kamre mea aa mea soch raha tha ki s papa muje q gur rahe the or sagar ne mera introduction adhura q diya..
Yaha sab ajeeb lagraha tha qki yaha aaneke baad jo b muje dekhta
Wo muje badi ajeeb najro se dekh raha tha..

Mea ye sab soch he raha tha ke tabi kisi ko dekh kar mea apne soch ke bahar aaya

Ab aage..

Mene dekha ki mere kamre ke bahar s papa or sagar khade the..

Mene unko andar aaneko kaha..

Par jaha pehlea s papa muje ajeeb najro se dekh rahe the ab wo bade pyaar bhari najro ne jagah badal di thi..

S papa ne aakar mujse bole..

Beta aaryan sagar ne bataya muje tumhare yaha aanekaa karan par wahase aaj tak koi b jinda nai louta hea beta..
Bohot khatra he waha..

Aaryan - Khatra toa jinne mea b hea uncle kab kya ho kisse patta par yaha meri behen or duniya ka sawal he mea kuch b karsakta hu inhe bachane ke liyea.

Meri baate soch s papa kuch sochne lagge..

S papa in mind - bilkul ni badla he ye siway apne shakal ke jisse dekh ek bar toa mea dar gaya tha..

Tabi kisiki madhur awaj se unka dyan tuta
Ham sab ne gate ke taraf dekha toa wo rosel thi sagar ki behen..

Wo dikhne mea jitni khubsurat thi uska pehna wa utna he katil..
Bohot he hot dikh rahi thi wo..

Mea toa usse dekh ek pal ko sochne lagga upar wale ne b isse badi fursat se banaya hoga..

Rosel kamre mea aate huye boli..

Bhai aap aagaye or abi tak mujse milne b ni aaye..

Itna bol wo sagar ke gale lag gayi thi..
Rosel ko dekh sagar khush b tha or pareshan b par q ye wahi jane..

Mea toa abi b bas rosel ko he dekhe ja raha tha..
Or yaha inka family drama chal raha tha..

Rosel ka dyan jab mujpar gira toa uski ankhe jo abi tak pinkish color ki thi..
Wo ek dam se badal lal hogayi ..

Or wo aage kuch karti ya bolti..
Tabi sagar ne uska hath pakar ke dabba diya..

Or ye baat mene b dekh li thi..

Sagar ke rokne ke karan rosel kafi achambhit thi Tabi sagar bola..

Rosel ye mera dost aaryan he or yaha mt.thunder par charne aaya hea..

Pehle toa rosel dost wali baat sun sagar ko gurne lagi or ant mea mt.thunder wali baat par muje..

Tabi wo boli..

Bhai aapka dost pagal he kya jo khudkushi karne ja raha he mt.thunder par..

Sagar - Aisa ni he rosel ye jaisa dikhta he usse b jadda taqatwar he..
Ye mt.thunder par jarur ja payega or lotega..

Rosel kuch or bolna chahti thi par s papa ne lunch ke liye chalne ko kaha..

Or rosel or s papa mere kamre se chalegaye..
Tabi meane sagar se kaha..

Bhai sun ab jaldi us pahad par char ke nikal the he yaha se..

Sagar meri baat sun bola..

Kya hua bhai..
Rosel ka bartav bura lagga ho toa mea mafi mangta hu par tu yaha se chalne ki baat q kar raha hea..

Aaryan - Pagal aisi baat ni hea bas bechaini si horahi hea thodi ..
Kajal ki yaad b aarahi hea..

Meri baat sun sagar haste huye bola kya bhai tu b kaisi baat karta hea.
Koini me papa se baat karta hu iske liye.
Fir b aaj ni kal he jaa payengea..

Meane b tk hea kaha..
Fir hamdono sath lunch karne gaye..
Yaha bohot bada or royal dining table lagga hua..
(Ab kya kya tha khane me ye mat puchana)

Mea or sagar jakar dining table par bethgaye..
Yaha mere samne ke taraf rosel bethi thi..
Jo muje he gure ja rahi thi..
Jo mene b note kiya par jadda dyan ni diya..

Wahi goa mea ghar 1 mea b papa divyesh or s mom milkar lunch kar rahe the..
Wahi ghar k pass jungle mea aghori leader ke bheje 5 bande beth the or apass mea baat kar rahe the.

Tabi unmese ek jan bola..
Wo 1st walla ghar he unka hea..

2nd- hmm.par din me kuch karna hamre liye b khatra hoga..
Or vo satark b hojayengea..

3rd - sahi kaha..
Raat mea he apne spcl style se hamla karenge kisiko pata b ni chalega or wo ladki jisse hame marne ko kaha hea wo b mar jayegi..

1st - par us tarike se toa unka pura pariwar b mara jayega..
Hame toa bas us ladki ko marna hea.

3rd - jo meane bola hea wahi hoga...
Ab chalo raat ki tayari mea..

Yaha ham sabka lunch hogaya tha or mea sagar or rosel mehel ke garden mea tehel rahe the..

Sagar or rosel aapass mea baat kar rahe the or mea unke piche chal raha tha..
Or soch raha tha ki..
Yaha jabse aaya hu bohot ajeeb lagray..
Aisa lagtay ki mea insab ko pehlea b mila hu khaskar rosel ko..
Usse dekh apne pan sa mehsoos hota hea..

Wahi rosel b sagar ko mere bareme he puch rahi thi..

Tabi rosel piche palti or mujse boli..

Aap waha q jana chahte ho muje ni patta par jaisa bhaiya ne kaha ki aap waha jaa b sakte ho or us crown ko paa b sakte ho..

Wo kehna kya charahi thi muje samaj ni araha tha isliye mene pucha tum akhir kehna kya chahti ho..

Rosel - yahi ki muje aapse ek mukabla karna hea talwar baji ka..
Qki waha jane se pehlea aapko black dragons se larna padega..
Toa me yahi dekhna chahti hu ki aapme kitna dam hea..

Rosel ki baat hote he sagar bola..

Iski koi jarurat ni hea rosel...
Aaryan ko kisiko kuch sabit ni karna..

Rosel haste huye boli..
Q aaryanji dargaye kya...
Itna bol wo jor jorse hasne lagi..

Mera ye sab karne ka jarra b man ni tha par fir b na jane q mene haa keh diya..

Or fir ham tino chal paray unke hatyar graha mea(weapon house)
Waha se rosel ne ek talwar li or muje b lene ko kaha..
.waha mene ek bohot he khubsurat talwar dekhi jo dikhne mea kafi sundar or bhari thi..

Mene us talwar ke tataf ishaara karte huye kaha mea wo talwar lunga..

Rosel ne jab mere ishare ke taraf dekha toa fir hasne lagi or boli..

Wo talwar toa mere pitaji b ni chala pate na he bhai jo ki is dragon city ke sabse taqatwar dragons he..

Meane uski baato ko najar andaj kar us talwar ke taraf gaya or ussea utha liya..
Wo talwar bhari jarur thi par mere liye nai..

Muje talwar uthate dekh..
Rosel chounk gayi or apne man me boli..

Ye kaise ho sakta hea ye talwar toa sirf wo he utha sakta tha..
Toa fir kaise..

Rosel abi b shok mea thi..
Mea talwar lekar uske pass pohacha or usse hila kar wapas hosh mea laya or bola chalo..

Rosel kabi talwar ko dekhti toa kabi muje..
Fir boli haa chalo..

Fir ham dono waha se nikal mehel ke back side mea Bane ground mea aaye jo ki sayad inki army ka training ground tha..

Ham dono maidan ke bich pohach gaye..
Or side mea sagar or uske mom dad b the jo ki apni takht par bethe the..

Mere hath mea jo talwar thi ussea dekh toa s papa b shock hogaye the..

Tabi mene rosel ko kaha jiske hath se pehlea talwar giregi wo harega ..

Rosel ne b tk hea kaha..

Or usne ek sainik ke taraf ishara kiya or muje boli..
Toa tayar ho..
Mene b haa kaha tabi us sainik ne shank nath phuka or tabi....
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RE: MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER) - by sarit11 - 27-01-2019, 12:42 PM



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