26-01-2019, 08:21 PM
Since title suggests both will commit sin , why not get it done with
The twists are not twists anymore it seems just like a race who will commit it sooner but we know that she will do it first based on the video at the start of the story or else the whole plot is blotched because Atul has no right to face her questioning if he does first. Also the new direction story is going negates the emotion that we saw in the beginning few sentences. when Atul himself playing around being intimate with other women but escaping just in time feeling guilty has no right to judge Anvita when he saw the video. He was so close to making one lol many times now. It defeats the purpose that one can exclaim that other is noble. Moreover its just getting weary now that both have same intentions and weak personality. True couples solve their problems or atleast try to solve it. Here I see Anvita is dominant with husband but submissive with others when she should have been the other way round. Moreover now after last update I feel this whole episode is being set by Varun. he might be using Radhika as bait and probably use this as his excuse to tilt Anvita into affair convincing if your husband can fuck my gf why cant we do it, another angle to it.
All in all I feel the plot is deviating from the tone it set in the beginning , in any case this is only story I come here for , not many interesting ones around. Thanks for the efforts and time , truly appreciate it.
The twists are not twists anymore it seems just like a race who will commit it sooner but we know that she will do it first based on the video at the start of the story or else the whole plot is blotched because Atul has no right to face her questioning if he does first. Also the new direction story is going negates the emotion that we saw in the beginning few sentences. when Atul himself playing around being intimate with other women but escaping just in time feeling guilty has no right to judge Anvita when he saw the video. He was so close to making one lol many times now. It defeats the purpose that one can exclaim that other is noble. Moreover its just getting weary now that both have same intentions and weak personality. True couples solve their problems or atleast try to solve it. Here I see Anvita is dominant with husband but submissive with others when she should have been the other way round. Moreover now after last update I feel this whole episode is being set by Varun. he might be using Radhika as bait and probably use this as his excuse to tilt Anvita into affair convincing if your husband can fuck my gf why cant we do it, another angle to it.
All in all I feel the plot is deviating from the tone it set in the beginning , in any case this is only story I come here for , not many interesting ones around. Thanks for the efforts and time , truly appreciate it.