26-01-2019, 07:07 AM
Quote:orangemonkey
dear author... I have read two stories of yours,infact,am continuing to do on this one .
I found the treatment meted out to Poonam in the earlier story, (though very harsh at the end,) befitting the Poonam character,it was bordering on the cruelty, but she nevertheless liked it. it was in way an expression of her hidden suppressed sexual desires.
In this story, i find chiku very loveable woman,who loves her husband intensely, though not expressed in the introductory part. I don't find a reason why she should receive the brunt of lusty perverts?
even if she must play to the game the men have hatched, for the love of husband.. she must discover her true self , by growing into much stronger woman,who not only discovers herself , but also turn the tables on the very men... i loved to see nupur/chiku emerge victorious and the men completely devastated by the very game they enjoy....
Hope you consider my views.... Pls continue and love your writing !!
cheers
wifyfantasy
I agree with u folks, blackmailing a woman is not nice - especially if she is as nice woman like Nupur. Unfortunately world is not fair & often nicest ppl are one to meet harshest treatment in world.
Though Nupur is a woman who loves husband & who even dream of allowing perverts like Rajeev or Vasu to touch her... this very qualities will make certain kind of people like Vasu/Rajiv enraged & hateful, because they are used to think of woman as cheap commodity who are available whenever they want. So its only natural that they will like to humiliate & exploit Nupur.
Having said that, please continue to read .... you never know what happens at end (Even I dont know at this point).