Nupur's Flight To Hell! (Wife, forced sex, blackmail)-by wifyfantasy

[sarit11]

love_couple

hello wifyfantasy !!
I have read your story for the first time and I must say you are a brilliant writer. you definitely know how to express which is actually the best thing.The way you have put dialogs and all the conversation , it has made the story so interesting and exciting.
Although, you had already mentioned the theme of the story( ie blackmailing ,forced sex) prior beginning with the story and the way story is going ,we all can imagine where it would lead Nupur to but still I kept on reading because you did not directly come on the sex part like any amatuer writer would do. your story build up was so intriguing and it generated such an interest that I kept on reading it.

Till here it was really exciting because story was still building up and any reader didn't know how u would proceed with the story , BUT now I fear as from onwards the story would become very predictable as u had already mentioned the theme. Now any person/reader can predict the story plot ,soon in 1 or 2 updates she would be blackmailed and forced to do sex and surely multiple people would be using her the way they want.
We all know at the end of a day its just a story but Don't you think if a story touches reality theme , then it becomes even more exciting as for unreal we can always go and watch porn .Till here the story seemed so logical and realtistic and thats why its been so exciting.

If its really going to be that predictable, don't you think charm of the story would be lost and it would become boring as we know she would be used by those people however they want. Seems all are villains and nobody is her friend. It definitely saddens us.
I hope you would prove this wrong and would bring twists in the story and not make the story that predictable beacause twists in the story gives life to the story.
Hope sometimes ball would be in Nupur's court too and she wouldn't always remain a helpless weak woman.


waiting .....

wifyfantasy

First of all, let me say thanks for your nice & encouraging words. It is great to read constructive comments from a reader like you. Really appreciate it!


Now to come to the points you raised : Yes, personally I too love to write stories where there is no explicit sex (In fact just submitted 2 such stories in VS competition) ... but a writer got to cater to readers, & 99% readers here expect explicit contents. So I guess any writer here can't avoid that.

As for being explicit on plot type in story title - that's just to warn readers who r not in such stories. I understand that forced sex/bdsm/brutal sex etc. are not everyone's cup of tea & as responsible writer, it's probably my duty to do inform thm in advance. In my last story on Poonam, I received angry PMs from lot of readers (especially female readers) on why I wrote such story which degrades woman. I had to ask them to go & read disclaimer line in my signature [img]file:///images/smilies/smile.gif[/img] so trying to avoid it this time!

2ndly, as you might have observed, my stories (including this ) are written on request of some xossip member - who typically is a charecter in story as well. They have some fantasy & I love to give their fantasy some words. In this case, the story requester wanted certain things to happen to Nupur - which I obliged. However, lets not discuss ending here - even I dont know the ending, it depends on how I am feeling the particular day I am writing the end. Anything might happen