09-12-2019, 11:41 PM
first explain their first sex..
This story may work well in video making.. here it is really killing the interest.
why? people tell stories in this way to keep the audience stick to the screen.. here, the longer gap between the updates kills the plot..
The dialogues are too much formal.. is this story happening 1000 years back..
This story may work well in video making.. here it is really killing the interest.
why? people tell stories in this way to keep the audience stick to the screen.. here, the longer gap between the updates kills the plot..
The dialogues are too much formal.. is this story happening 1000 years back..