01-12-2019, 03:51 PM
(01-12-2019, 08:31 AM)Logan555 Wrote: Samay ki kumi aur kuchh niji vyasttao ki wajah se update dene me waqt laga. Update ka first part de diya hai aur ab agla part banne me kuchh waqt lagega. Par us update ko banane se pehle thoda vichlit hu aur apni inner feeling apne readers se batna chahta hu.
Do din pehle Hyderabad me jo hua wo behad ghatiya aur vikrit mansikta ka parichayak hai aur shabana ka update banate waqt na jane kyu mujhe Lalu aur uske dosto me wahi mansikta nazar ati hai. Ye story puri tarah fictional hai aur yaha likhi har story fictional hai bus maze ke liye. Par is story ko padne wale ya yaha ki story ko padne wale inse itna jada connect na ho ki use apne dimag me bitha le.
Is story me kai log Lalu ke kirdaar ko pasand karte honge pasand kare par uske jaisi mansikta na lae. Lalu ko pasand karte karte khud lalu na ban jae kyuki lalu ek ghatiya aadmi hai aur wo wahi rahega. Kya kahu mai us incident ke bare me kaise log aisa kar jate hai. Shame on them bhagwaan uus behen ki aatma ko shanti de.
Meri yaha ke visible non visible readers se request hai yaha ki kahaniyo ko yahi pade yahi chhod de use apni mansikta na banne de. Thats all i want to say.
Logan bhai apne jo kaha bilkul sahi kaha log kaise itna gir jate hai, pata nahi unhe to paida hote hi Mar jana chahiye, wo apni maa aur behen ke bare me kyo nhi sochte hai ki agar unke sath aisa ho to unhe kaisa lagega, aap story likho bro per last me Lalu ke sath kuch aisha karna ki aisi soch rakhne walo ko ek sabak mile.