A wedding ceremony in village

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Waah Logan Bhai! aapne poori story ko itminaan se likha hai. Har ladki ke sanyam ki vristit vyakhya kari hai, saath hi saath saare characters ki sthithi ka poorna varnan kara hai.

Very much in awe with the story progressing...

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Thanks bro, mai puri koshish karta hu ki har kirdaar ko uska proper space du aur har ladki ki kahani ka flavour bakiyo se alag rakhu. Isilye saato kirdaro ko ek doosre se alag rakha hai. Kai kahaniyo me sex scsne jaldi laane ke chakkkar me situation nahi ban pati maine koshish ki hai ki har situation ko aram se banau.

Thanks for appreciating it.

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