22-01-2019, 07:39 PM
(22-01-2019, 07:58 AM)kavitakhullar Wrote:
'Tun tan edan keh riha jiven kuwarey mundey ney pehli baar liti hundi a' debu dey hathon kagajn di potli fad chehkdi hoyi ramanjot boli ..hath ch aye kagaj vekh khushi nal khind e uthi c oh ..
' nyi o gal nyi' ramanjot wal vekhda bolea debu' changa nyi lag riha eh sab'
'Kyoun swad nyi ayea' gaur nal debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli' vekhn ch tan gaddar run a'
'Tusi samjdey kyoun nyi' hichkichanda hoyea debu bolea ' aj tak preet ton elawa kisi hor nal nyi..'
'Ohhh .. ' debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli 'ena na soch'
Kuch na bolea debu .. samj nyi aa rahi c usnu k usney ranno nal kr theek kitta k galat rat da chetey kr kambn lga . Kabu na rakh sakeya c apnry aap tey c e chakmi run ...
'Vekh debu .. ' debu nu chup khada vekh kuch sochdi hoyi ramanjot boli ' hun jo ho gya ho gya .. naley eh kyoun sochda tun glt kita kuch der chup reh fer boli' naley fer teri preet b tan hun kisi hor ton marwandi a ..
Jhatka e lga debu nu preet barey sun
O b eney khjlley lafjhn ch ramanjot dey munh ton sun ..
'Mera matlab apney dujey gharwaley ton .. ' gal sambhldi ramanjot debu nu samjandi boli' aap e tun kehnda bdi khush a hun oh .. tenu ki lagda usdi nyi lenda hona jeetu ..ja o nyi dindi honi gharwaley nu.. j o sab bhul tere bhra jeetu nu dindi a ..tun kyoun sochda k galt kita tun .. ranno tan aap ayi c tenu den tun kehra aap ..'
Kuch samj na ayi ki jwaab devey oh jameen wal vekhdey dean lattan kambn lagea .. sahi tan keh rahi a eh ... preet tey jeetu .. sochdey sochdey lun jhatka lay akad jeha gya ...
'Mein kagaj vekh lwan fer tenu dasdi haan agey ki krna' kagaj lay kahli kahli bahr nu jandi bina us wal vekhey boli ramanjot..
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'Aa debu ..' plang tey sarey kagaj khilaar chaukri maar beithi ramanjot kamrey andr aye debu wal vekhdi boli' ah vekh debu sarey kagaj kutti sambh k beithi c'
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'Ji ... 'plang kol aa khada hunda kagajn wal vekhda bolea tan kuch nyi debu pr ramanjot dean akahn di chamak tey awaz di khank vekh smj gya kinni khush a ramanjot unha kagajn nu vekh....
' Eh eh' ek kagaj chuk debu nu dikhandi boli ramanjot' eh panj lakh tan usney ramneek dey sohrey mla hari singh nu ditta hoyea ney'
'Panj lakh ..' gaur nal ramanjot dey hath ch fdey kagaj wal vekhda debu hairaan hoyea bolea' edi waddi rakm..'
'Aho jameen baichi c usney pichley sal 'agey nu ho debu nu kagaj dikhandi ramanjot chehkdi hoyi boli
'Ji ... 'sah niglda debu bolea .. dil dhark uthea usda jidan plang tey beithi ramanjot agey nu hundi usnu kagaj dikha rahi c debu di njr kagaj ton hatt sidi usdi di hik tey jaa tiki wadey wadey mottey mottey mummey kameej dey galley vichon nikl jhattia mardey chah k b na rok sakeya debu uthey vekhn ton ..adey ton jyada mummey bahr nikl udaria mardey ... gorey chittey mulaym chikmey .. mummeya di dungi laakir nu tan kameej andr pyi njr andi chiti bra b na luko saki
'Tun gal krin es barey mla naal' mud plang tey chaukri maar beithdi ramanjot chehkdi hoyi boli 'puchin kad waps deney usney ..'
'Ji koi na ..' ramanjot wal vekhda debu chah k b apnia najran uston dur na kr sakeya . chaukri mar k beithi dey mottey mottey sudaul pattn upr ghut hoyi chitti salwar vichon lishkda bharey bharey pattan da gulabi pan .. patta ch uljheya kameej da palla .. kuch tan c us punjbn bharpur hati katti uchi lambi jatti dey jism ch jehra debu chah k b uston apni njr na hta sakeya
'Tun sattey nu keh gaddi kad sehar jana' debu dean njrn ton beparwah ramanjot us wal vekhdi boli' vakil nu milna tey naley ramneek tey karanveer nu b mil ayoungi bdey din ho gye'
' ji' ramanjot ton akhn churanda debu bahr nu janda kuch sochda hoyea bolea ... ' mein sochda c j kal ..'
'Kyoun ..! 'Debu wal vekhdi ramanjot hasdi hoyi usnu tichar krdi boli' kyoun ranno ney aana....fer ek dum usnu ghurdi hukm dindi boli' jaldi tyar ho ja waps b ana....'
' Ki gal eni gaur nal kyoun vekh riha' sattey nu bahr bdi gaur nal kisi nu vekhdey vekh hotal ch beith chah peendey debu ney pucheya ' kaun a eh '
'Eh jassi a ramneek da gharwala' gaur nal sdak tey gaddi kol khadey bandey wal vekhda bolea satta
'Naal kon a esdey ..' us bandey nu naal khadi kudi naal hass hass gallan kardey vekh debu ney puchea
'Esdi saheli' kuch sochda hoyea satta cha da ghut bharda bolea' suneya es di rakhail a .. viah karwan nu firda '
'Rakhail' ek sum hairaan hunda debu bolea' sardarni nu pta es barey'
'Nyi .. ' gaur nal jassi nal khadi kudi wal vekhda satta bolea' kisi college di mastrni a ...
' kmaaal a eni changi sohni vohti dey hundey hoye b eh..' jassi wal vekhda burburaya debu...
'Mla di bigdi hoyi aulaad a' us wal vekhda satta bolea' pta nyi kyoun sardar hurra ney ramneek da viah es naal .. '
'Hmmmm...' kuch sochda hoyea debu bolea' ramneek nu pta...'
' haan bechari sardani di ijjat kr chup a ..' jassi nu gaddi ch us kudi nal beith k janda vekh satta bolea' kehn nu tan mla ney esnu gharo beidkhal kitta hoyea a ..par sirf duniya di njr ch ...lokan nu dikhan lyi ...sab pta usnu apney mundey di kartoot da.. vakhri kothi b usney e lay k diti a'
'Sardarni ney kuch b nyi keha' sattey wal vekh hairaan hunda bolea debu'
'Ek baar gal kiti c mla naal ..kyoun kitta beidakhl esnu' kuch der chup reh bolea satta' pr .. kudi da mamla a .. pind ch apni ijjat kr chup a ..naley fer kehar singh da yaar velli c mla'
' mein karunga gal' kuch sochda hoyea debu bolea
'Koi fayda nyi .. 'uth khada hunda satta kuch der chup reh bolea ' sardarni puj gyi honi karanveer nu lay k ramneek kol.. chal hun..'
'Haan' sadak wal vekhda debu cha da khali gilas mej tey rakh kuch soch khada hunda bolea...' galat gal a eh'
Yakeen nyi ho riha c ramanjot nu eh debu a k kehar singh jini haleemi saleekey nal ramneek kol beitha debu usnu put put keh galln kr riha c ...
'Bapu aj bdey laad ch didi nal gal kr riha ki gal' ramanjot wal vekhda karanveer hasda hoyea bolea
' bdey dina baad miley hay na es lyi shyad 'unha wal vekh karan wal vekh gal bdldi boli ramanjot' tun das teri padayi kidan chal rahi a parda b a k ..awen sehar ch . '
'Nyi nyi mummy puri mehnat kr riha' ek dum bolea karan 'agley haftey ton paper shuru a .'
'Tun fikr na kr .. sab theek ho jana ..' ramneek dey sar tey hath rakh debu ney ek baar ramanjot wal vekhea fer ek dum bolea' mein krda jassi nal gal...
'Nyi bapuji.. tusi koi gal nyi gal karungey' debu nu rokdi hoyi ramneek boli' awen mere nal aa k kalesh karu ..'
'Edn kidan kalesh karu' ramneek wal vekhda debu bolea' asin maar gye haan .'
'Aj meri wdi fikr kr rahey o' gaur nal debu wal vekhdi ramneek boli' udon kyoun nyi fikar kiti jad mera viah ..'
'Sanu ki pta c putt' ramneek dey sar utey hath ferda debu gardan ghuma ramanjot wal vekhn lga ...
'Sab pta c tuhanu' boldi boldi awaz bhar ayi ramneek di
'Nyi putt sachin nyi pta c ..'gaur nal ramneek wal vekhda debu bolea 'kehra maa peo apni dhee nu ..'
Kuch na boli ramneek apney aap nu sambhaldi edr udr vekh lgi
'Eh ki hoyea ' gaur nal ramneek di gardn tey pye nissan wal vekhda debu bolea
'Kuch kuch nyi' kahli kahli ch apni gardn dey nissan nu chunni nal lukondi ramneek uston akhn churandi boli.... ' tusi beitho mein roti bna di haan'
'Nyi roti baad ch khawa gey.. thora kam jana teri mummy ney' ramneek kolon uth ramanjot kol anda debu bolea' chaleyea hun pehln hari singh nu mil ayea fer pta nyi kitey daurey nu na nikl javey '
'Haan haan..' ramanjot b khadi hundi boli' sattey nu kaho gaddi kadey.'
'Ramneek khush nyi a jassi kol' gaddi ch beitha debu sattey wal vekh fer ramanjot wal vekhda bolea
'Tenu kis ney keha ..' thori hairaan hundi ramanjot debu wal vekh sattey wal vekhn lgi
'Kehna ki a .. usdea galln ton pta lag riha ramanjot wal vekhda debu thori talakh jehi awaz ch bolea' udn kehndey o mein eh kr sakdi haan oh kr sakdi haan tey apni kudi da pta nyi o sukhi a k dukhi ...
'Ki matlab ... ' car agey beithey debu nu ghurdi boli ramanjot
'Jassi koi hor janani rakhi beitha tey ..' bolda bolda chup kr gya debu ..gaddi chalndey chalndey sattey di tan jaan e halk ch aa gyi eh eh debu ney tan saaf e das ditta sardarni nu
'Ki ... ' ek dum sidi ho car ch beith akhn kad di boli ramanjot' jassi ney hor jnani ..'
'Aho tuhanu kyoun yakeen ana ..tusi tan pind ch rasukh ijjat bnan lyi mla dey ghar viah diti kudi eh nyi vekheya o uthey khush b a k nyi..'gardan ghuma pichey nu vekhda debu gussey ch burburaya..
'Kadi ramneek ney daseya e nyi ..'hairaan hoyi ramanjot b burburayi
'Ki dasdi bechari ..' sadak wal vekhda vekhda chup kr gya debu fer kahla jeha pay sattey wal vekhda bolea' hor kini dur a mla di kothi ..'
' bs agley mod tey ...' gaddi ek psssey nu morda satta car ch lagey sheeshey vichon pichey beithi ramanjot wal vekhda bolea ..samj gya aj kuch na kuch mla di kothi ch hoyouga edi wadi gal hovey tey sardarni chup rahey. ..
' mein gal karungi mla.. naal tun kuch na boli' debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli ....
'Bha ji.. j tuhanu pta c jassi edan da tuhanu sadi ramneek da viah usnal nyi karwana chahida c' debu wal vekh kuch sochdi hoyi ramanjot hari singh wal vekhdi boli
'Sanu lageya viah ton baad sudr jayouga ..' ramanjot wal vekhda hari singh bolea' sochya ramneek wargi samjdaar pdi likhi vohti ..smja sidey rah lay ayougi par afsoos o b kuch ..'
'Tusi tan bdi asani naal keh dita afsoos ...'meri dhee da ki banu' mla hari singh tey usdi vohti wal vekhdi ramanjot boli
'Usnu kis cheez di kmi ... vakhra ghar kothi sab tan hay uskol . .'ramanjot tey debu wal vekhdi mla di vohti boli' naley bhai saab di salah naal e tan..'!
'Pr jehra tusi jassi beidhkl kr ditta apni jmeen jyadaad ton ...' unha wal vekhdi ramanjot boli
'Ohhh ..' hsda hoyea hari singh bolea' o tan tuhanu pta e a rajneeti ch eh sab... hun virodhi dhir nu koi mauka thori dena c ..naley jsssi kehra sadey ton dur a anda e hona .. dsseya c usnu tusi aana ..'
'Lo aa gya jassi' andr andey jsssi nu vekh mla di vohti chehkdi hoyi boli' aa jassi putt vekh tere sass sohra aye ney ..'
'Ki hall a sassu maa' agey nu ho ramanjot dey pairn nu hath landa jassi hasda hoyea bolea' aj bapu ji kol..ki gal khair tan hay ..'
'Kuch kam c mla ji naal' jassi wal vekhdi ramanjot apna gussa pee muskuraan di kosis krdi boli
'Hor sohra saheb bdey din la dittey bahrley mulk' debu wal vekh akh marda jassi hasda hoyea usnu tichar karda bolea' ki gal ..'
Debu oh tan shyad usnu e udeek da c bolea kuch nyi khada ho usdean akhan ch vekhn lga
'Ki gal edan ki vekh rahey o' hasda hoyea jassi sareya wal vekh debu wal vekhda bolea' jwayi haan tuhada ...jwayiiii...'
Eston agey na boln ditta debu ney jassi nu ... khich k eni jor di thappd mareya usdey munh tey ...bhurak ek passey nu ulrda digda digda bachea
'Teri himmat kidan hoyi kehar singh ...jassi nu thappd marn di .. ' garjda akhn kad da hari singh cheekda debu agey aa khada hunda bolea
'Tun thappd di gal kr riha shukr kr esdi gardn lah tere hath utey nyi rakh ditti' uston b uchi awaaz ch cheekda gurraya debu
Ek baar tan ramanjot b hil gyi debu nu gussey ch cheekda vekh
'Esdi himmat kidan hoyi.. sadi kudi tey hath chukn di' mud agey nu ho gardn ton jassi nu fad gussey ch apney wal khichda bolea debu
Kudi nu matlab ramneek tey hath chukya jassi ney ..'sundey e gussey ch pagl ho jassi wal vekh agey nu hundi gurrayi ramanjot' tun ramneek tey hath chukya ..'
'Bhain ji bhain ji 'kehar singh tey ramanjot nu gussey ch Pagal hoye vekh hari singh apney app nu sambhlda unha wal vekhda bolea 'ghar ch niki motti gal tan hundi...'
'Niki motti gal 'akhan kad hari singh wal vekhdi ramanjot gussey ch kadakdi awaz ch boli' meri ramneek tey hath chukya esney ...' pagl hoyi ramanjot pistol kadn lyi dab ch hath pandi boli' khadey khadey nu goli na maar dewan'
'Bhain ji bhain ji 'agey nu ho bhaj k ramanjot da harh fad jassi di maa usnu rokdi boli' minnat ali gal a mein maffi mangdi haan jassi walon... yakeen dilandi haan agey ton kadi b jassi ramneek nu...'
'Agey ton' jassi nu ghurdi gussey ch kambdi ramanjot cheekdi hoyi boli 'j es kol rahugi tan e kuch kahuga ... sadey nal pind jayougi ramneek huney ...
'Jidan tuhanu theek lgey' hath jod ramanjot dey agey aa khada hunda hari singh kambda hoyea bolea
'Tey tun 'jassi wal vekh ramanjot gussey ch gurandi hoyi boli 'j ramneek nu milan ja us kol aan di kosis b kiti jeounda e jameen ch gadd dayoungi ..'
'Mein mein... pind ja k ki karungi..'hairaan hoyi ramneek debu tey ramanjot wal vekhdi boli
Sadey kol rahungi tera apna ghar a' agey nu ho ramneek nu upr ton lay haithan tak vekhdi ramanjot boli' jassi tey usdey peo nu mil k aye haan asin .. ho gya faisla koi lod nyi tenu jassi nal rehn di ..'
'Agey kehra o ethey rehnda' unha wal vekhdi burburayi ramneek
'Ki gal hoyi bapuji ..' unha dean gallan sunda hairaan pareshaan hoyea karanveer agey nu hunda bolea
' kuch nyi ..' karan wal vekhda debu bolea' tun b chal sadey naal pind'
'Pr agley haftey mere paper ney bapuji' ramanjot wal vekh debu wal vekhda karan bolea
'Ohhhh..' ena keh kuch sochda hoyea debu ramanjot wal vekhn lga...
'Koi na tun pappern ton baad aa jawin..' apna faisla suna di ramanjot ramneek wal vekhdi boli' tun tyar ho ramneek'
Kuch na boli ramneek samj gyi sab pta lag gya mummy nu jassi barey..'
Pr mein ekela ethey kidan ..' kuch sochda hoyea karan bolea' edn nyi ho sakda mein tey didi papern ton baad pind waps ..'
'Nyi ramneek hun ethey nyi' ek dum boli ramanjot' awen jassi ethey aa esnu tang karo ..'
'Edn kidan tang karu ..' mein nyi haiga ethey ..' ramneek wal vekhda karan b gussey ch bolea
'Mummy karan theek keh riha ..' ramanjot wal vekh kuch sochdi hoyi rambeek boli' asin karan dey papern ton baad pind aa jawangey..'
'Nyi ramneek... awen ethey aa jassi tenu tang karu ' pareshaan hundi ramanjot debu tey karan wal vekhdi boli
'Nyi mummy usdi fikar na karo' ramanjot wal vekhdi lamba sah lendi boli ramneek' o tan pehlan e ethey aa k khush nayi c ..bs lok laaj tey tuhadey dr krkey kadi kadi aa janda c ..'
'Ena kuch teri jindgi ch ho riha c tun menu daseya e nyi' gaur nal ramneek wal vekh pareyshaan ho ramanjot boli
'Ki dasdi mummy' ramanjot wal vekh fer debu wal vekh hauka jeha lendi boli ramneek' jassi kidan da a sab pta tan c bapuji nu ..'
Kuch na bolea debu kehnda b ki ... usnu tan aap kuch nyi pta c aj e milia c hari singh tey jassi nu ..'
Mummy asin papern ton baad pind waps aa jawangey' ramanjot wal vekhda karan bolea' kuch e dina di tan gal a ..'
Kuch der chup rahi ramanjot fer debu wal vekh karan tey ramneek wal vekhdi boli' waisey tan hun jassi himmat nyi karda ethey aa tenu tang krn di .. edn krdi haan jiney din tusi ethey rehna satta b ethey e tuhadey kol rahega ..'
'Haan eh theek rahuga mummy..' ramanjot wal vekh fer ramneek wal vekhda karan bolea .' Kyoun didi ..'
'Jidan tuhanu theek lgey ..'kuch sochdi hoyi ramneek kuch der chup reh boli' mein tuhadey lyi roti bna di haan ..'
'Nyi roti rehn e dey .. asin waps pind jana' ramneek wal vekh ramanjot wal vekhda debu bolea.'
' haan putt bukh rahi e nyi ..' ramneek wal vekhdi ramanjot boli' vohat mada hoyea tere naal'
Kuch mada nyi hoyea mummy' agey nu ho ramanjot dey gal lagdi ramneek boli' meinu pta c jis din tuhanu pta lag gya ..ehi hona c ..'
Dear kavita G update tey bht wadia c per tusi
Jaldi jaldi wich sb kujh mix kr dita. .. Ranno ty
Dipu wich jo kujh hoya oh khulasa tusi krna c
Us ny potli box kidda lia ranno tun .??
Satta ty Dipu tha shop ty kiu bethy c tey ramjot
Kithy c ??
Karan ty ramneek wich ki hoya c ?
Dipu chh aina hosla kidda aa gia jis di awaz
Ramanjot aggy nikaldi nai oh kidda mla naal
Ty jassi naal Gussy hoya ?? Shakal tey badli c
Dipu di per karan tey ramneek ny pehaneya nai
Awaz tuu k aye awaz unha dy peo di nai ??
Please Kavita G aina Sawala da Reply jarur
Deyo....aassi udeeq kran gey .....
Ainjh hi wadia wadia likhdy ravo.. .Thnks
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