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Fantasy Choti si Bhool By Mr. Jatin ( COMPLETE )
Maine ushke haatho ko hataaya aur ushke honto ko apne honto mein ley liya.
Maine pucha, “jaan ab hum ish safar ke aakhri padaav par hain. Kya tum final ride ke liye taiyaar ho, main apna ling tumhaari yoni mein daalne ja raha hun”
“Ohh jatin,……. please mujh se kuch mat pucho, mere liye kuch bhi kahna mushkil hai,…… I love you. ley chalo mujhe jahaan ley chalna hai, main tumhaari patni hun, har kadam par tumhaare saath rahungi” —– ritu ne aahein bharte huve bhaavuk andaaj mein kaha
“ok jaan fasten your seat belt I am going to take you to the moon” —- maine kaha
“ley chalo jatin jahaan ley chalna hai, mujhe pura yakin hai ki tum mujhe girne nahi doge” —- ritu ne pyar se kaha
maine apne ling ko apne daayein haath mein pakda aur ritu ki yoni par laga diya.
ek pal key liye mere ling aur ritu ki yoni ke beech bahut pyari kiss huyi. Man kar raha tha ki ushi position mein ruka rahun.
Par kishi anjaan shakti ne mujhe aage dhakail diya aur mera ling lagbhagh aadha ritu ki yoni mein sama gaya
“Aaaaahhhhhhhh…… jatin….. I love you” —- ritu ne aahein bharte huve kaha
“I love you too jaan” —— maine kaha
aur ye kah kar maine ek jhatke mein apne ling ko ritu ki yoni mein dhakail diya. sab kuch pyar ki madhoshi mein ho raha tha
ritu ne mujhe baahon mein bhar liya aur apne naakhun meri peeth par gada diye. Mujhe halka sa dard huva par vo dard itna pyara tha ki main kah nahi sakta. ish se saaf pata chal raha tha ki ritu ush pal ko bahut jyada enjoy kar rahi hai. ye mere pyar ki jeet thi
phir maine bina ruke ritu ki yoni ke ander apne pyar ki halchal shuru kar di. Maine pyar ka vo toofan khada kar diya ki ritu jor jor se aahein bharne lagi
“aaaahhhhh…….. jatin thodi der ruko varna main chaand tak pahunchne se pehle hi gir jaaungi” —– ritu ne kaha
“aaahhhh…..nahin jaan, chaand ka safar beech mein ruk kar pura nahi kiya ja sakta. hang on. Main tumhe hargeez girne nahi dunga. Agar tum gir bhi gayi to main tumhe phir utha lunga. Par ye gaadi ab apni manjil par hi rukegi” —— maine haanpte huve kaha
“ooohhh……tum bahut badmaash ho jatin” —- ritu ne aahein bharte huve kaha
“tumhe pyar karne ka ye matlab nahi hai ki main ye khubsurat badmaashi nahi karunga” —– maine kaha
“aaahhhh……lagta hai, maine tumse shaadi karke galti kar li hai, tum ab mujhe jeendagi bhar sataaoge” —- ritu ne haanpte huve kaha
“aahhh…haan sataaunga, vo bhi pure haq se, I love you” —- maine kaha
“I love you too jatin, thodi der ruko na” —– ritu ne kaha
“kya tumhe dard ho raha hai, ritu” —— maine dhakke maarte huve pucha
“nahin jatin dard nahin hai, par bardaast nahi ho raha” —– ritu ne kaha
“chaand ki unchaayi tak pahunchne ke liye tumhe thodi der aur bardaast karna hoga. Hum pyar ki aisi unchaayi ki taraf badh rahein hain jahaan hum kho jaayenge aur parmaatma mein mil jaayenge” —– maine kaha
“oooohhh….tumhaari baate meri samajh se baahar hai jatin, please jaldi khatam karo….aaahhhh” —- ritu ne kaha
“mujh par vishwaas rakho jaan, main ish milan ko sex se kahin aage ley ja rahaan hun…..aahhh” —- maine bina ruke kaha
“k..k..kahaan ley ja rahe ho jatin” —- ritu ne pucha.
“Pyar ke charam par, mujhe khud vahaan ka rasta nahi pata. Shuna hai ki vahaan bhagvaan rahte hain. Shaayad ye pyar hamein vahaan ley jaaye” —- maine kaha
mujhe khud nahi pata tha ki main kya kah raha tha. apne aap mere dil se kuch na kuch nikal raha tha.
main thodi der yu hi laga raha. ritu bhi thodi der kuch nahi boli. bas padi padi aahein bharti rahi
“aaahhh……kaisa lag raha hai tumhe jaan” —– maine apni speed aur badha kar pucha
“bahut acha…..par bardaast nahi ho raha, ab ruk bhi jao” —– ritu ne kaha
maine apni speed aur tej kar di. Hum dono ki saanse apne charam par pahunch gayi
“bas jaan…….. hum pahunchne… hi wale hain, hang on” —- maine kaha aur apni speed ko toofaan ki gati de di.
Aur phir achaanak mera prem ras ritu ke ander bah gaya aur main ritu ke upar gir gaya.
Vakt maano tahar gaya.
Achaanak maine mahsush kiya ki ritu subak rahi hai. maine sar utha kar dekha to vo ro rahi thi.
Maine pucha, “kya huva jaan, maine kuch galat kiya kya” ?
“Main aaj phir ye soch kar ro rahin hun ki agar bhagvaan ko hamein ye khubsurat rista dena tha to hamein itne badsurat rasto par kyon ghumaaya. Kya hum pehle nahi mil sakte the” —- ritu ne rote huve kaha.
“Dukhi mat ho jaan, sukar manaao ki hum aakhir mein mil to gaye. Ish jeendagi mein hum dono bahut neeche gire the. Tumhaari galti kam thi. main hi tumhe neeche ghasit kar ley gaya tha. kya tumhe ye baat pata hai ki prakriti ka ek niyam hai, ‘jo bahut neeche girta hai ushi ki bahut uncha uthne ki bhi sambhaavna hoti hai’. Newton ka third law bhi to yahi kahta hai, ‘To every action there is always an equal and opposite reaction’. Shaayad bhagvaan ko hamein neeche gira kar bahut upar uthaana tha. Dekho aaj hum pyar ki ek khubsurat unchaayi par khade hain. Yahaan se ye duniya aur ye jeendagi bahut khubsurat nazar aa rahi hai. dil chota mat karo aur bhagvaan ko hamein ish mod par laane ke liye sukriya karo” —— maine kaha
“tum sach mein bahut badal gaye ho jatin” — ritu ne kaha
“sab tumhaare pyar ka asar hai jaan, sab tumhaare kaaran hai”
“vaise tum ab baahar nikloge ya phir main dkakka de kar baahar nikaalun” —- ritu ne hanste huve kaha
“tum hi nikaal do dhakka de kar. Mera tumse dur jaane ka man nahi hai” —– maine kaha
“tum ek dum deewane ho gaye ho” — ritu ne kaha
“jishe jeendagi mein itna pyar mile vo bhala deewana kyon nahi hoga” —- maine kaha
“jatin tumne apni diary mein leekha tha ki hum bas chintoo ko rakhenge, aur bacho ki kya jaroorat hai. par kya hum ish pyar ka phool nahi kheelaayenge” —- ritu ne sharmaate huve kaha
“tum chaahti ho ki ish pyar ka phool kheele” — maine ritu ki aankho mein jhaank kar pucha
“haan jatin” —- ritu ne kaha
“theek hai phir main din raat tumhaari jamin ki seenchaayi kar dunga, dekhna pyar ka bahut pyara phool kheelega” —- maine kaha
“din raat ki jaroorat nahi hai Mr… tumne kya meri jaan lene ki thaan rakhi hai” —- ritu ne kaha
“tumhaari jaan mein meri jaan hai ritu, I love you. Tum chinta mat karo mera pyar tumhe pareshaan nahi karega” — maine kaha
“main to majaak kar rahi thi jatin, tumhaara pyar meri jeendagi hai, pareshaani nahi. dubaara aisa mat bolna” —- ritu ne kaha
aur phir hum ek dushre ki baahon mein kho gaye aur thodi der chupchaap pade rahe. Main abhi bhi ritu ke upar tha.
kab neend aa gayi pata hi nahi chala
par jab mein neend mein tha to mere dil mein mitha mitha ahsaash ho raha tha. hum dono ka milan mujhe meri aatma tak mahsush ho raha tha.
hamaara milan, delhi mein hoga, vo bhi chaandni raat mein, maine socha bhi nahi tha. maano koyi sapna sach ho gaya ho.
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subah chidiyon ki awaaj ne hamein uthaaya. Pehle meri aankh khul gayi. ritu mere baaju mein sikud kar lati huyi thi. hum dono ke upar ek patli si chaddar thi. kab main ritu ke upar se hata, kab vo chaddar hamne odhi mujhe kuch yaad nahi. yaad hai to bas itna ki chaandni raat mein maine apni patni ko pa liya
mumbai jaane ke liye aaj shaam 6 baje ki flight hai. ritu koyi 10 baje karol bagh apne ghar chali gayi thi. main ushke ghar ke liye nikalne wala hun. vaha se hum dono airport ke liye nikal lenge.
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