Fantasy Bigg Boss Ka Ghar – Bollywood Reality Show by 3MinuteMan

[sarit11]

jaratwa

Here are a few things I would love to say:

1) Firstly, congratulations for selecting such a wonderful theme. This story is going to become really really huge if you handle it properly. I Thank you big time for this. You are doing great

2) However, to become legendary like the 'Rekha Bhabhi and Alka' erotic story, you have got to make the characters and situations more sexually seducing. Full on sex with different characters is going to get monotonous and ultimately people might lose interest. Thus, to make this an iconic erotic story, in my view following can be done

3) Collect revealing (cleavage) pics and erotic caps from movies as much as possible. The exbii members like us can help you with it as the thread goes on and on. Pics like 'Katrina in Boom', 'Priyanka' in Andaaz, 'Neha Dhupia in Julie' attached along with the description is going to take the stories to a completely different level I feel.

4) There should be more seduction between characters. With the actresses more reluctant for sex earlier. And they use 'cleavage shows', 'drop pallus', occasional 'boob squeezes', 'handjobs from outside' to their advantage to stay in the competition. It has to grow slowly with a lot of seductive talks between the characters. Things like 'do you like what you are getting to see??' when the pallu drops and etc.

5) When 2 characters make out, make sure they talk to each other often by using their names like 'What do you think Hrithik of my cleavage?' and further. This adds uniqueness to the story. Otherwise, if you use more of 'She undid his pants. He did ....' ...after 10-15 lines, it seems like any other porn story. I must say u have done great with this thought though.

6) Make the characters reluctant for sleeping together on the same bed earlier. Even if they do, they sleep separately. And how, with time passing by, sometimes they get comfortable, but again the actress resents such a move in the morning, so that the woman's reluctance for sex is always maintained even though she made out. Eg. You can have Katrina and Hrithik make out, with Katrina seducing, reluctant but wanting sex at the same time, where it builds up to a sexual encounter. And then after they are done, you can take Katrina back to before they made out, where she says to Hrithik 'It was just for once', rather than having her all comfortable around Hrithik from then on, because then the next time they meet it will be like where she just undoes her top and bottoms, and they start having sex.

I hope the xossipians would agree to my views???? COMMENTS?

3MinuteMan

thanks for your suggestions ...... i will surely try to incorporate them in future updates .....though some of the points you mentioned ... ive already taken them into account since beginning of the story ........

Reviews and suggestions by you or any other reader will be appreciated in future too