16-11-2019, 07:28 AM
(15-09-2019, 05:49 PM)Cupidangel Wrote: I got a feeling that this story is getting rejected by many cause it has elements of incest. Although Rahul is not blood related with Shilpa still there is a stigma of social-incest (not sure if that's even a correct phrase) as he is her stepson. I didn't want to make it incest story truth to be told.I just wanted to make things personal for every character, wanted to fill the plot with high stakes .If I knew this gonna happen, I would have built the plot on adultery theme only. Let me know your views on this matter guys.
Sometimes the story gets boring not bcos of incest but bcos of too much unnecessary details and uninteresting conversations. The plot of the story is excellent and u r a wonderful writer . Pls keep the non sexual parts a bit less descriptive
Yeah Sometimes I get carried away trying to depict things as vivid as possible,I will admit this much.
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