14-11-2019, 08:51 PM
Hi,
Since my story is nearly completed I am getting a chance to read this new story of yours. I started from page 1 to the last update you had written so far. The story is going great like how your stories go. I especially liked the seduction part in Goa. I feel this is the most difficult part to write. It has to be logical as well as interesting. Your story has both of these elements. Looking forward to more of this story.
Since my story is nearly completed I am getting a chance to read this new story of yours. I started from page 1 to the last update you had written so far. The story is going great like how your stories go. I especially liked the seduction part in Goa. I feel this is the most difficult part to write. It has to be logical as well as interesting. Your story has both of these elements. Looking forward to more of this story.
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