Fantasy அவன், அவள், புருஷன் (Completed - நிறைவு)

[olumannan]

Thank you author.
To be very frank, i was not happy on the certain areas of this story. Every person has a family, character, background etc. I think its important to detail them out for the readers to understand how those entities affect their behavior. This is grossly missing in the Vikram and Mohan characters.
To portray vikram as strong, you seems to have portrayed mohan as very weak character.
Anyways, it is your story and you have the right to take it the way you like.

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