28-10-2019, 06:04 PM
Quote:gopal.reddy
Fantastic story..
Really I am feeling Janani in my dreams and visualising the whole scenes..
Great narration...
Please complete the story with out stopping by giving all the reasons
Quote:veenaimo
you have given a exceedingly good continuation that i expected.. way to go, but remember this play has lot of scope, dont finish it that easy.
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sensualkomal
GREAT NARRATION, I IMAGINE MYSELF AS JANANI AND FEEL WETNESS BETWEEN MY LEGS....