Adultery I WAKED UP THE BEAST IN MY WIFE by indodesiboy
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Quote:fady.psyched
Nice story, poor grammar!


 indodesiboy
Thanks for your comment and sorry if my grammar is poor. Thats because i am not a english professor like you. I know to write story not to teach english.

Quote:luckykrish
is it exam to see the grammar?
Here one thing is important that it is reaching to the readers and they understand the tempo of the story. if yes it is OK. Do not give comments to authors. He is extraordinary in his writing.please encourage to write further eposides.

if we discourage it is not good to continue
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RE: I WAKED UP THE BEAST IN MY WIFE by indodesiboy - by sarit11 - 28-10-2019, 05:53 PM



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