27-10-2019, 08:28 AM
Great story and great writing. Good theme as well. As a suggestion I would say to contiune on your making of a "company whore hostess" theme. This time the clients who have came from overseas invite the actual buyers and need to be kept happy at whatever expence. So Ruchi, mother-in-law and even Mrs Sen have to be used, but can't disclose that they are the employees wives and mothers for the reputation of the company. So when the clients have their way, even Reddi can't do much. Jay's humiliation will continue as well. Maybe they start by being the waitresses. I don't think I need to tell you how to write, you are pretty good at that.
Keep the updates coming
Keep the updates coming