Misc. Erotica The Blindfold by karthik.bonobo

[sarit11]

Moogi90

Dear Author,

First of all, thank you a story well written in a short story format and giving a conclusion as well. Few tuppence from my end; kindly be informed that we shall take what you are providing, these are just few notes that could be useful (or not) for your continuation of next story.

- Good narration.
- Nice vocabulary.
- Clear storyline/plot.
- Fast paced closure/too fast (If you could've kept the pace of the introduction till the end, there would've been more than ten chapters even to reach the seduction of the widow.
- First time Anal experience is always not an easy feat; however, the way it was narrated felt like the widow was well experienced in such activities previously.
- Followed by DP and Tripple (felt like it was too heavy for a first timer).
- Closure with the woman who found true love and yet again shared by three was not so-so erotic (hey, I am just giving my opinion, please don't get stressed with this comment).

Looking forward to read the next episodes with Hema and positively expecting some tantalizing agony and reluctant play (but elaborated style).

Keep going brother!!!